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Post by squire on Dec 22, 2008 18:23:47 GMT -5
filsingergames.proboards106.com/index.cgi?board=fed&action=display&thread=1222&page=3Starting on the post just before card 9, I started a storyline to begin a heel turn for Nemean. I'd like some feedback on how it is being handled. Too fast, too slow? There is an underlying reason for the turn that you should be able to pick up on with the behind the scenes stuff. The subject matter can be considered mature, but I am trying to handle it without being explicit.
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Post by wildfire on Dec 22, 2008 20:53:18 GMT -5
I like it, Squire... very reminiscient of Jericho in the current WWE story... which is a good thing. I like him standing up to Ventross, that really cemented things.
It could lead nicely into the whole secret guild thing, or not.
*shamless plug mode on*
I toyed with Nemean as a heel as well (back in the first couple months of my fed), but I did a totally different angle.. I had him acting as if he was 'in bed' with the Syndicate... after some discussions with the booking team, we (me, myself and I that is) decided to go in a different direction, so he's a full on face for me now.
*Shamless plug mode off*
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Dec 23, 2008 2:35:54 GMT -5
It can defiently work. I also toyed with a heel turn for Nemean but dropped it after the heels started stacking up in my fed. Now with a few exceptions, most of my roster ride a line that they will readily cross if its in their best interst.
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Post by Vidtek on Dec 23, 2008 15:38:43 GMT -5
I think it's going well, don't pace it up if you don't have to, this could be a great "slow burn" heel turn. In my aCe Nemean did accept Ventross' offer to rejoin the Ravagers, only because fellow Showman Mann resigned with The Syndicate, although he lets Neuromancer take the lead, and Totalis got all chummy with Averice and The New School efectively desolving the League.............
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Post by squire on Dec 26, 2008 12:08:04 GMT -5
Thank you for your feedback. I'll keep on the path I am moving along.
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Post by Mr. Beefy on Dec 26, 2008 12:41:16 GMT -5
Thank you for your feedback. I'll keep on the path I am moving along. Well a little late now but I was going to say I like how it is currently going.  |
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