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Post by Pariah on Sept 23, 2016 16:21:42 GMT -5
Things are looking serious right out of the gate, my friend... Shayne is still the Face that runs this Place, which didn't come as a huge surprise... What I didn't expect was to see Patch and Skiver earn a victory over the Immortals without some kind of outside interference... Sure, they played some dirty pool, but c'mon... They're called MEAN Streets, not CLEAN Streets...
Drury is a smug S.O.B. and you're portraying him perfectly... The post show power rankings are a nice touch as well...
Excellent work!
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Post by Crossbones on Sept 23, 2016 16:33:16 GMT -5
Things are looking serious right out of the gate, my friend... Shayne is still the Face that runs this Place, which didn't come as a huge surprise... What I didn't expect was to see Patch and Skiver earn a victory over the Immortals without some kind of outside interference... Sure, they played some dirty pool, but c'mon... They're called MEAN Streets, not CLEAN Streets... Drury is a smug S.O.B. and you're portraying him perfectly... The post show power rankings are a nice touch as well... Excellent work! Thanks, My friend! In Drury's comment I thought of the 80s comedy Brewster's Million... When his great-grand father says " I'm gonna teach you to HATE spending money. I'm gonna make you so sick of spending money that the mere sight of it will make you wanna throw up!" So I applied that to the situation. lol I think I should have put Prime Colonizer or Paganax than Perfect Specimen... Specimen is turning out to be a lame duck so far and I hope he can turn it around. |
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Post by barflymike4ever on Nov 26, 2017 11:07:49 GMT -5
Drury continues to be overly smug and after reading 77 pages I'm going blind... can I say loved it all and can't wait to see what happens next. especially with the ladies and what Sly is going to do to tilt things. Martial Law ruling. they have most the gold, the power and everyone else is scrambling
again great stuff, gonna sleep now
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Post by Crossbones on Nov 26, 2017 13:03:13 GMT -5
Can't believe you read all 77 pages, my friend. Thank you, for reading!
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Post by barflymike4ever on Nov 27, 2017 1:15:46 GMT -5
Can't believe you read all 77 pages, my friend. Thank you, for reading! took me combing the boards as I tried tapping your name and it would tell me Not Found. do it now it works. Mutant is working the internet. wish I could have left reviews for the others but now....I'm heeeeeere 
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Post by Bri on Nov 27, 2017 12:34:10 GMT -5
Hey Crossbones! I checked out that section that you mentioned about in @pariahs fed while paying attention to Pariahs and Eliaths comments counterbalanced against your own. It all took me back to my role playing game days. Really fantastic stuff! Off the charts creativity dude! The Reality Show angle / approach was something I had never come across so far in the boards or in playing. The intetactions between you, Pariah and Eliath was a parallel show unto itself. Just read your first page and I'm intending to read the entire 77 page fed. Will take me a bit but looking forward to really absorbing all. Thanks again for sending link! |
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Post by Crossbones on Nov 27, 2017 12:56:45 GMT -5
Hey Crossbones! I checked out that section that you mentioned about in @pariahs fed while paying attention to Pariahs and Eliaths comments counterbalanced against your own. It all took me back to my role playing game days. Really fantastic stuff! Off the charts creativity dude! The Reality Show angle / approach was something I had never come across so far in the boards or in playing. The intetactions between you, Pariah and Eliath was a parallel show unto itself. Just read your first page and I'm intending to read the entire 77 page fed. Will take me a bit but looking forward to really absorbing all. Thanks again for sending link! I'll give you a little background on the Reality Showdown angle. I was watching WWE Tough Enough at the time and got the idea from that show. I wanted to do a competition where guys would wrestle and then people could vote on one of the losing wrestlers to save and then the judges could save one person. I was basing the voting on who of the losers had the best match. Pariah and Eliath were leaving the comments, that was more based on the popularity of the wrestler than his performance. Which, was how the WWE Tough Enough was going as the viewers were saying ZZ. I hated that, so after a couple shows later, I started to use the Judges as my mouth piece against what Pariah and Eliath were saying. So, it was just something that was organic and not planned. I was reacting to their reactions to my show. Then for the ending, I had several other endings plan but went with that one because I knew no one would see it coming. But, Thanks Bri for going back and reading it. I plan on doing something creative in my upcoming FTR fed. |
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Post by Bri on Nov 28, 2017 8:17:16 GMT -5
Thank you Crossbones for creating for us another world to go to! Ftr sounds interesting as well. Will check that out too. Also enjoyed the inspiration for that angle - which again is unlike anything Ive come across. Bravo! |
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