FED WARS / UWO

[chunkyt]

I am about to start posting my fed here . Firstly I would like to thank Tom, Osk and Thad Killian for their help getting me started . There are others who have helped me and I appreciate it all .
I am new to posting so any help, advice or even criticism i will gladly take on board, thanks again. Hope you all enjoy

[chunkyt]

METEORITE SHOW / GWF
@deimos INTERGALACTIC ARENA, MARS
ATT : 194,325

Show starts with Scimitar walking down a hall with Vin Strutter when suddenly Strutters mobile goes off.
Strutter: "Hello, who is this?"
..........
Strutter: "Tonight?, yes...really....in the ring!....yes i know it makes sense......this'll be amazing!"
Struuter puts his mobile back in his coat "truly amazing"

Pyro's and lasers start the show.
Vanity :"That sounds amazing, i wonder what it'll be"
Switchblade :"We'll see, but for now it's on with the show!"

Retribution v Nosfera w/Omen
Nosfera wins with 'THE DEMONS BREATH". After the match he continues his assault and just escapes before Endgame hit the ring . Retribution is injured for 7 fight cards.

Anivar v Betrayer
Betrayer wins via 'BLACK BETRAYAL'. After the bell Endgame enters the ring and him and Anivar bouble team Betrayer injuring him for 4 fight cards . Endgame grabs a mic " Rulebreakers and villians beware for i will enforce law and order, because of our weak comissioner i have too!!"

BACKSTAGE....Sly Drury is with Vin Strutter
Sly Drury:"So, what is it?"
Strutter:"I can't say, all i will see say is that it'll make me the leader of the villians"
Sly Drury:"We'll see Strutter, we'll see!"
Strutter:"I gotta go Drury, MY tag-team champs are up next"

GWF TAG-TEAM TITLE
Circus Strongmen (1) v Jungle Warriors
Circus Strongmen win via countout after Tanck piledrives Panther Warrior onto the concrete .

Endgame v Valour
Endgame wins with a 'ROLLING FIGURE FOUR'

IP SINGLES TOURNAMENT SEMI FINAL
Payback v Swarm
Vidtek is standing in the ring , he has already qualified for the championship match, with the mic . He calls out Payback first but then Swarm storms the ring and starts before the bell . A wild brawl erupts outside the ring and Payback gets DQ'd for going too far . Payback is livid.

NON-TITLE MATCH
Monolith v Bloodline w/ENcubus and Mother Superior
Bloodline wins via DQ. After the bell Monolith throws the ref aside and beats on Bloodline who is left bloodied and battered in the ring. Bloodline is injured for 5 fight cards.

Vin Strutter's misic/fanfare begins. He makes his way for the ring, taking in the crowds jeers and boo's like they were the most amazing cheers. The ring itself has been decked out to resemble a circus tent. He waits for silence.
Strutter:"I know everyone in attendance and all watching from afar want to hear my amazing announcement, so without further a do........here it is !!!!!"
With that a long black car is driven down the ramp towards the ring. It stops at the end of the ramp, just before the ring. A figure steps out, it is wearing a long jacket with a hood that hides its identity and build. The figure goes up the steps to the ring and stands next to Strutter.
Strutter:"May i introduce my newest member....."
The figure reaches to his hood and slowly removes it. Standing next to Strutter is the Amazing Mann. The crowd start to jeer .
Strutter:"The Amazing Mann" he pauses "Well you have been in that small federation recently, i can't remember the name of it now, but you are now back in the big league with me!"
Mann:"ACE"
Strutter:"What?"
Mann:"It's called ACE, All-Centra Entertainment"
Strutter:"Whatever that does not matter now you are back. Go on show them all"
With this Amazing Mann removes his coat, underneath he is wearing a neon green t-shirt with the GWF symbol emblazoned on the front.
Strutter:"Yes i have signed the biggest free agent in the universe!"
Mann looks puzzled:"Who is free? I am here to let you know that someone wants to address you"
Strutter now looks puzzled:"Who?"
Suddenly a door on the long black car opens and out steps a woman, she is reptillian in apperance, she goes straight to the ring. Strutter stands infront of Amazing Mann to face her.
"I am Miss Trust and I am the new CEO of All-Centra Entertainment. I am here to issue a challenge to the GWF!"
Strutter:"Challenge, what challenge?"
Whilst he is saying this Amazing Mann removes his GWF T-shirt, underneath he is wearing a lemon yellow vest with ACE accross the front.
Miss Trust:"I want to speak to the organ grinder not the monkey" she nods at Mann and before Strutter knows what is happening Amazing Mann grabs him and throws him over the top rope.
The Circus Strongmen, Tricks and Scimitar start running towards the ring from out the back. The doors on the car open and out step The Shock Syndicate - Holocaust and Flatliner.
Miss Trust:"Come on boys Holocaust and Flatliner want to play!"
Suddenly " STOP" Massif is at the top of the ramp."Who the hell do you think you are coming to my arena?"
Miss TRust:"I am here to challenge you , bring your tag champions to ACE EXTREME, with their belts, and Shock Syndicate will take them."
Massif:"We'll be there, but no GWF belts. Now outta my ring!"
As he says this something jumps from the crowd and smashes Massif with a chair, it's Nosfera!!!! who leaves as quickly as he entered just before the FDF run out to help. They all tend Massif. Endgame looks up just in time to pull Massif out of the way of the reversing car. The crowd are stunned. ACE in GWF? GWF in ACE? Nosfera attacking Massif? So many questions but as yet no answers !!!!!

[wildfire]

Nice intro to the Fed Wars angle... looking forward to where you go with it.

As to suggestions:

--I little more formatting make things easier to read, if you're willing to put in the time to do so... I personally do just a little formatting (setting the results off from the story stuff), which I think really helps people follow along...some people do really great stuff with clip art, colors, etc.. very cool to check out, but I personally don't have the patience to do it.. I'd rather play more

-- A Recap of what has gone before (Seems like your fed is in mid swing) would be a nice addition... or, just make sure you add bacjstory as your going along.

[chunkyt]

Thanks for that advice.

My GWF History goes something like this . Encubus was GWF Champ but had to vacate the title when a new 'mysterious' owner bought the company . After this happened a tournament for the title and tag team title's took place - Monolith won the GWF Title and the Circus Strongmen (don't ask me how but i have changed the dice just in case) won the tag titles.
All other feuds are as per Subversion 2122 and are simmering along .
My ACe has no past, what i have done is ask opinions and looked at the fed forums and come up with champions just so i can have some focal points really . At the first ACe card all main belts will be defended , hopefully i have chosen my champions wisely.
Essence Champion : Peacemaker v Paganax
Essence Tag : Primevil Destruction v Oaken Bro.
Holovision Champion : Avarice v Amazing Mann

The Battlezone title is vacant but i plan to bring that in a later date when the two feds become one , THE UWO.

Thanks again for your advice, i will try to take it on board.

[Thomas (TK)]

Nice swerve on Strutter with Amazing Mann...lime yellow vest however? eeeck....

Great start Richard and look forward to more results!

[Alexander Ubel]

It looks like I have another fed to follow. You had alot of injuries on this card, but hey thats the way the dice do ya sometimes.

Using the Syndicate as your front men for the invasion is great. The Amazing Mann is one of my all time favorite characters.

[chunkyt]

ACE EXTREME

START OF SHOW THE HOLOVID SHOWS BACKSTAGE. MISS TRUST IS WITH A GROUP OF BURLY SECURITY MEN.Miss Trust:"They will be here, let them in!"[/i]
Pyro and laser show starts the show.
Miss Trust goes to the ring:"Tonight we have got three titile matches. We have Pendragon live on the Nemean show, if they show we'll have the GWF Tag-team champions against the SHock SYndicate. All in all tonight its the start of a new era of ACE. As for the future i can announce that from next show we'll be having a longer broadcast due to our popularity, meaning a guaranteed 10 matches per show minimum! Yes ACe is the new face of the sport!"[/i]

Scorch and Hustler v S and M
Scorch and Hustler win after Painmaster gets DQ'd for interupting a pin attempt. A busted open Sychophant is led away in chains , along with Painmaster, but even through the blood you can see him smiling as though he enjoyed the pain.

NEMEAN SHOWNemean:" Welcome fans to the number one talk show in wrestling today. There is loads to talk about so we had better crack on. We have to talk GWF and the Essence Heavyweight title scene. My guest to help me is....Pendragon!"Pendragons music hits, he takes his time getting to the ring, greeting fans and taking in their cheers all the way. Once in the ring he takes a mic:"Nemean you wanna talk Essence Title and GWF. Both interest me!"Nemean:"I do big man, so whats your opinion on the title match tonight between Peacemaker and Paganax?"Pendragon:"They are both tough, i respect them both athletically but i i do not lile either and know i can take them both!"Nemean:"So you want the winner?"
Pendragon:"ASAP"Nemean:" And the GWF?"
Pendragon:"We have a new CEO, she turns up on a GWF show issuing challenges against them. The GWF have accepted the challenge. Afed war has begun. Now i am a soldier first and will be on the front line!"Suddenly the arena goes black and the sound of an air-raid siren goes off and a spotlight appears at the top of the ramp. Its Disasters music. The Gladiator makes for the ring and goes face to face with Pendragon . He puts his hand towards Nemean who hands over his mic, he then beckons for Nemean to leave with a nod of his head.
Disaster talking to Pendragon:"Your female leader, if there could be such a thing, challenges the GWF to a fed war. I am down with that, you come here and state you are a soldier and will be in the front line . That is where your problems start . I AM DISASTER , I AM THE AETHRAN WAR MACHINE, I AM THE FRONT LINE!!!!"Pendragon:"I know all about you Disaster, and like Peacemake and Paganax I respect your ability, but like i do with them i know i can take you!"Disaster:"Lets get a ref then"Pendragon:"Yes lets"A referee runs out from the back
Pendragon v DisasterPendragon wins via DQ after the ref disqualifies Disaster for brawling outside the ring. Both wrestlers look puzzled by the decision.

HOLOVISION TITLE
Avarice v Amazing MannAvarice wins with a swinging neck snap. After the bell he continues his assault injuring the Amazing Mann for 5 fight cards!

BACKSTAGE THE GWF SHUTTLE PULLS IN. OUT STEPS MASSIF AND THE CIRCUS STRONGMEN. MASSIF LOOKS BACK INTO THE SHUTTLE AND SAYS TO SOMEONE "When i say, okay "[/i]

ESSENCE TAG-TEAM CHAMPIONSHIP
Primeval Destruction v The Bros. Oaken
Oakens win and become Essence Champions when Rorus pins Warfare after a missed deathjump attempt. All the members of the New School go to the ring to celebrate.


Lance At-Las v Darkseed
Darkseed gets DQ'd after unleashing a manic assault outside the ring.

Godsend v Aspin NorthstarGodsend wins via Countout after the piledrives Northstar outside the ring.


ESSENCE HEAVYWEIGHT TITLE
Peacemaker v PaganaxPaganax wins via countout after knocking Peacemaker out, outside the ring. Peacemaker retains the belt . Paganax is furious and starts assaulting the referee and some ringside officials before leaving the ring area.

GWF v ACE MATCH[
Circus Strongmen v Shock Syndicate What a match. Tanck and Flatliner busted open. Shock SYndicate win when Gyrt gets slammed through the announce table by Flatliner and is unable to beat the count.

As soon as the match is over Massif goes to the ring.
"Well that was different. But now Amazing Mann get to this ring!"
Miss Trust goes to the top of the ramp :"Massif, Amazing Mann is injured and he won't be coming to the ring . No one will tonight but we will be there at RAGE where i could maybe interest some GWF stars to sign for ACE!"Massif:"There will be no signings but i would like to ask someone to come to this ring now and issue you a challenge, you like challenges"Suddenly through the crowd runs Payback who gets into the ring and grabs a mic:"Hey scaly, i want Ventross on RAGE in a cosmic cage!"Massif:"Sounds interesting"
Miss Trust:"Indeed it does" She smirks, turns and leaves.

[Alexander Ubel]

Nice card man. I think you can really go somewhere with the invasion angle so good luck with that. Also Pendragon vs Disaster the rematch should be good.

A piece of advice, you might try spacing the dialogues between your characters to make it easier to tell who's speaking.

[chunkyt]

thanks for the advice mate . Will try next time

[chunkyt]

thanks for the advice mate . Will try next time