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Post by Tournament Master on Apr 29, 2008 16:23:53 GMT -5
This is the greatest aCe fed ever!!! Great job on all the promos Jmello, and excellent Essence champ.
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Post by jmello on Apr 29, 2008 16:53:22 GMT -5
Thanks fellas for the kind words. Peacemaker seems to be my favorite new character to write for, his intentions are good and he's got the size to back it up, but he tries not to tick people off too much.
Totalis as my first champ was a complete surprise to me, but when the dice kept choosing to focus on Avarice and Shepard in the ring, I knew he had a shot. Honestly, I was hoping Lance At-Las' predicition would start to take fruition and Aspin could prevail, but alas, it's far too soon for the young whipper snapper.
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Apr 29, 2008 23:43:21 GMT -5
Love the write-up. Scud seems to be a force to a lot of feds so far.
Was rooting for Avarice (who you bring across great) but seeing Totalis (another favorite) take the Essence was great.
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Post by jmello on Apr 30, 2008 14:49:40 GMT -5
aCe Presents The Show - Card 3 01.25.2123 from Western Pavilion, Westland Province, Centra Prime
- Dark Match - Aspin Northstar vs. Witchdoctor Witchdoctor defeated Aspin Northstar with a Putrid Piledriver Match Rating: 2.00
- Dark Match - Darkseed vs. Nes Kincade Darkseed defeated Nes Kincade with a BELLY OF THE BEAST Match Rating: 1.50
- Dark Match - Esperanto vs. Nightmare Esperanto defeated Nightmare with a DEAD MAN'S HAND Match Rating: 1.00
- Dark Match - Paganax vs. Scud Paganax defeated Scud with a Face Smothering Match Rating: 2.00
- The Champ Welcomes Us - :::We kick of The Show by Totalis walking down to the ring with his new aCe Essence title. He drapes the title over his shoulder and climbs the turnbuckle, then he basks in the glory of himself by spreading his arms out and putting his head toward the roof. He leaps down and holds a mic in the middle of the ring.:::
Totalis: Last night, at Sudden Violence, I humbled you all. Just as I tore through the ranks as an upstart in that other federation, I just as quickly climbed, at a meteoric rate, to the top of the new all-Centra Entertainment. Many of you Centrans are in awe of the Essence, while I, I just capture it with ease and place it on my wall of fame. You see the Essence to me is just another trophy, just another medal, just another title. To you all, it signifies the power of this dimension, and that power is now mine. You can all bask in the greatness that is the Tournament Master, you can all bask in the greatness that is...Totalis.
:::At this moment Avarice's music hits and the fans start to cheer for the Black Rose. He comes out by himself, no one accompanying him, and he heads out of the back to the top of the ramp where he then stops and lowers his hood. He addresses the newly crowned champion.:::
Avarice: You see Totalis, last night, at Sudden Violence, I got distracted. There was a pest, by the name of Shepard and he, he caused me to miss out on what is rightfully mine. Much as the Essence signifies power, so does the Family Rose, and to me, you're just a nother thorn in my side. I want that title back to where it belongs and I will take it tonight!
:::The fans cheer as the announcer's confirm, tonight, Totalis vs. Avarice for the Essence Title.:::
The Others vs. Primeval Destruction Odyssey defeated Hybrid with a back brain kick Match Rating: 0.00
Lance At-Las vs. Peacemaker Lance At-Las defeated Peacemaker with a MARS MANHANDLER Match Rating: 1.00 Match Notes: :::At-Las came to the ring and called out Peacemaker.:::
At-Las: Peacemaker, you seem to have taken a liking to making yourself the law around here, but when Avarice laid me out did you do anything? Of course not. Well tonight, I make an example of you.
:::After the match, At-Las grabbed a mic.:::
At-Las: Now see, that's how you handle your business. Now Totalis...Avarice, whomever has that Essence, I earned a spot in that match and I let my faith get ahead of it's true destiny. Aspin wasn't quiet prepared yet, but I am, so I'm coming for you.
The Brothers Oaken vs. Hustler and Scorch for the aCe Tag Team Championship Rorus Oaken defeated Hustler with a BLACK AND BLUE Match Rating: 0.00
The Brothers Oaken won the aCe Tag Team Championship
Shepard vs. Godsend Godsend defeated Shepard with a HELL'S THRESHOLD Match Rating: 2.50
- The New School Backstage - :::Avarice is shown preparing for his match, when Nes Kincaid starts to speak to him.:::
Nes Kincaid: Are you sure that's a good idea? We can help you, you don't have to do this alone.
Avarice: Silence, my mind is made up. I will handle this unwashed miscrient myself. He's nothing but a pmpous braggart and has no chance facing the Black Rose with no distractions. I want no interferences of any kind, your only job is to make sure no one comes out there.
NK: OK, if you say so man, but I still think you should let us help.
Avarice: I know what I'm doing, don't question me.
- Pendragon Encounter - :::At this time we go back out to the ring where Pendragon is holding a mic.:::
Pendragon: Last week I let myself down. Bare in mind, I have nothing to prove to any of you, but I came here to win and Totalis bested me in the Centra Cup Finals. His reward? He won the Essence title. My punishment, I didn't even get asked to appear at Sudden Violence. Well that's all about to change as I take center stage, even if by force. I came for a battle, I came for a war, I came to...
:::House of Pain's music plays and out walks PainMaster, Sycophant, and Mr. Bloat whom is in shackles.:::
PainMaster: You should thank me boy.
Pendragon: For what?
PainMaster: I requested this beast known as Bloat to remain in his shackles tonight.
Sycophant: Mmm..Shackles.
PainMaster: And you my friend, you made a mistake by saying you came for a battle. In case you missed it, the House of Pain is known for it's battlefield matches and we've asked that the Battlefield title be reinstated as a singles title. Since they won't just give it back to us, we've set up a match, you vs. Mr. Bloat for the new Battlefield Title at aCe's next PPV, Death Sentence. But be warned we may not be able to contain Bloat until then, so watch your back.
Mr. Bloat: Bubbling slop for breakfast, lunch, and supper!...blood and guts for dessert.
:::Pendragon swallows hard as he stares down the war that lies before him at Death Sentence.:::
Gabriel vs. Holocaust Gabriel defeated Holocaust with an ELYSIUM'S CHARGE Match Rating: 1.00
- The Nemean Show - :::Nemean is in the ring with a set up for the newest show to hit the airwaves, the Nemean Show!:::
Nemean: Welcome all to the soon to be, most talked about portion of all Centra entertainment, the Nemean Show! Tonight, it is my honor, to have a Ravager War Hero as my guest, none other then Ventross!
:::Ventross makes his way down to the ring and joins Nemean in the ring. He stand almost at attention as Nemean starts firing away with the questions.:::
Nemean: So, to what do we owe the honor cheif?
Ventross: I am here to make sure the all Centra entertainment finds no rest. I am here to garner more conflict. Recently I was declined an offer from the former Heathen Cheif Paganax and since he's not with us, well...he's against us.
Nemean: I see, very interesting. So did I hear the rumor mill right, have you joined "The Six" in the fight against evil?
Ventross: Yes, it seems as though you have heard correctly. I will be teaming with Shepard, At-Las, Northstar, and the Angels as a new group, bounded together by their hatred for evil. We will fight for the greater good and keep aCe on the up and up.
Nemean: Outstanding! I'm so glad you've come and graced us with your presence.
Ventross: You know, I said if your not with us, you're against us, so where do you stand?
Nemean: Hey, let's not change the subject here, umm...besides, that's all the time we have for tonight. Thanks for joining us on the Nemean show, goodnight.
:::Nemean rolls out of the ring and heads to the back as Ventross just stares him down.:::
- Totalis update and Amazing Mann - :::We go to the backstage area and see Totalis stretching for his upcoming match. Then we cut to a different dressing room where Amazing Mann is talking on his holophone in front of a stoic Holocaust and Flatliner.:::
Amazing Mann: Now this is not what we had planned. First, I lose in the first round of the Centra Cup, then I was snubbed from the Sudden Violence card. Also, your sure fire former tag champs have lost their killer instinct, they lost the tag team gauntlet and now Holocaust has lost a singles match to that annoying rat with wings, Gabriel...Well something better change soon or I'm going to have to take matters into my own hands.
:::Amazing Mann hangs up and shakes his head as he looks at the immobile Flatliner and Holocaust.:::
Totalis vs. Avarice for the aCe Championship This match ended in a draw Match Notes: :::This match took off and went back and forth, Totalis tried to retreat to the back but Avarice followed and the two traded blows until they were both counted out.:::
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Post by jmello on May 3, 2008 4:28:42 GMT -5
***Special Announcement***
The powers that be have announced the first match for aCe's "Death Sentence" on February 21st.
aCe Essence Title Totalis (c) vs. Avarice in a Cosmic Cage
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2008 11:18:40 GMT -5
Great happenings, jmello!
Like most people have said, you've got a knack for writing Avarice...
Totalis as Champ is very, very cool. Suprising he came out on top in the 4-way and then survived a One on One with the Blackheart...
Totalis v. Avarice in the Cage should be SWEET.
~ :-Xsk
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Post by jmello on May 7, 2008 13:31:07 GMT -5
aCe Presents The Show - Card 4 05.03.2123 from Arena Tarkania, Tarkania, Centra Prime
- Dark Match - The Amazing Mann vs. Aspin Northstar The Amazing Mann defeated Aspin Northstar with an UNBREAKABLE Match Rating: 4.50
- Dark Match - Nes Kincade vs. Nightmare Nes Kincade defeated Nightmare with a beg off and low blow Match Rating: 0.00
- Hydra Lumberjack Match - Witchdoctor vs. Odyssey This match ended in a draw Match Notes: WIth Omni, Scud, Primeval Destruction, and a few others at ring side, it was obvious this match was going to get out of hand. A wild brawl erupted and the match was ruled a no contest.
- The Battlefield Title - :::We open up the show to the usual pyro and video on the holotron. Out walks the war hero Aegis to much fanfare. He enters the ring and addresses the crowd.:::
Aegis: People of Centra, we are at peace, but let us not be naive enough to think that things will remain that way with ease. Last week, I heard something that echoed through my ear drums and when it hit my brain, my heart ached. That sound...those words...Battlefield Title. Now you see, the Battlefield Title can be a good thing, it reminds us of memories past, it reminds us to stay on the edge of our seats and to be prepared at all time. It also reminds us of the horror we went through recently. At this time, I want to give my vote of confidence to Pendragon as he brings the Battlefield title to Centra, come on out here.
:::Pendragon comes out to the ring and addresses Aegis:::
Pendragon: I appreciate you vote of confidence Aegis, but I don't need it. I've got nothing to prove to you, to the fans, or to anybody else in this great dimension. Make no bones about it, I come to win, and win I shall.
:::Aegis looks a bit shocked as he goes to address Pendragon, when suddenly House of Pain's music hits.:::
PainMaster: Tonight, Pendragon, you will witness what lies ahead. We've asked and been granted a match versus you.
Pendragon: What do you mean, a match versus me? Who? You, Bloat, that sick freak pet of yours?
PainMaster: Yes, yes, and yes. You will be facing all three of us in a handicap match, that is unless you can find a partner.
:::Pendragon looks at Aegis who puts his hands up as if to say "Not me, I'm retired." Then Pendragon's eyes pan across the arena, looking out at the fans. He looks almost frightened, but with a hint of anger in his eyes. Suddenly a live feed begins to play on the holotron, it's aCe champion Totalis!:::
Totalis: People of Centra, do you want to be bored? I thought not. What is this, a main event without the awesomeness that is Totalis? I won't have it. Tonight, Pendragon, I will be your partner. While I could care less if you live or die, nor do I care about this silly Battlefield Title, the aCe champion is here to be in the spotlight. The aCe champion is here to be the main event! I will humble your foes known as House of Pain and they shall be soon seen on the Wall of Fame.
:::Without Totalis fades out as House of Pain now looks worried. Pendragon is in the ring shaking his head yes, up and down as if pleased with this development. The announcers make it official, tonight aCe Champ Totalis and Pendragon vs. the House of Pain!:::
- Backstage with the Regulators and Match Announced - :::We go to the backstage area where we see Esperanto with some shot glasses empty in front of him, Hustler wiping down the side of his gun and Scorch chewing away on some chaw and spitting it into a nearby spitoon. Suddenl;y all three stop what they're doing as a little man enters their dressing room.:::
Esperanto: Now boy, I do belive you've lost your marbles.
Hustler: Yeah, what are you doing in here, punk?
Scorch: Something on your mind?
Scud: Just stopping by to introduce myself fellas. I'm your local, friendly, neighborhood super hero, Scud!!!
Esperanto: I see, well isn't that nice fellas?
Hustler: Yeah, sho is.
Scorch: I think I've found a new species of puke.
Scud: Well just wanted you guys to know, if you ever need some help, I'm here to come to your rescue.
Esperanto: Well thank you for that little darling.
Hustler: Yeah, now amscray, chump.
::Scroch gets in Scud's face and snarls and growls.::
Scud: Well..s..s..see ya guys. I'm off to save the day!
:::Hustler whispers under his breath.:::
Hustler: Crazy mo fo.
:::We go back to our announcers who announce that tonight Ventross will be teaming with rival Paganax versus the newly crowned tag champs, the Bros. Oaken! Then we go back to backstage where Avarice is standing by.:::
Avarice: People want to know what I think about Totalis' decision to be in the main event tonight. Well let's put it this way, his talent has never been questioned, his brains on the other hand, well let's just say, he's not winning any Centra Peace Prizes. If he wants to be in the spotlight, so be it, the Black Rose will remain in the shadows and only be seen, locked inside a steel structure, not caring about your medals, trophies, and titles. That metal structure will not allow you to rest on your laurels. That metal structure, will be the blossoming of the Black Rose era, and the demise of the Wall of Fame. This Totalis is your Final Round and you will be beaten.
Lance At-Las vs. Darkseed Lance At-Las defeated Darkseed with an Atlas World Beater Match Rating: 0.00
- Ventross and Paganax encounter - :::Paganax enters Ventross' dressing room. Ventross looks up from what he's doing then gets right in the face of Paganax. Paganax looks Ventross straight in the eye and tells him...:::
Paganax: Two words...tonight...truce.
Ventross: I told you, you're either with me or you're against me.
:::The two stare each other down as the announcer's talk about the potential explosion of this tag team. Paganax finally turns away and walks off angrily.:::
The Brothers Oaken vs. and Paganax, Ventross Donk Oaken defeated Paganax with a COUP DE GRACE Match Rating: 0.00 Match Notes: Paganax went for a tag, but Ventross turned his back and walked away. The Oaken Bros. then put a double team hurting on the Heathern Cheif.
Shepard vs. Peacemaker Shepard defeated Peacemaker with an EXORCISM Match Rating: 0.50 Match Notes: Peacemaker came out before the match and claimed he must restore peace. He mentioned that he needed to get into the Battlefield Match to protect all Centra entertainment.
Shepard then came out and said to hold on a minute. If anyone could protect this company, it was him. Then the match began.
- The ArchAngels Comedic Relief - :::We go to the backstage where we see a "turned off" Flatliner and Holocaust. Gabriel and Exodus are messing with their buttons on the back of them. Suddenly Gabriel grabs Flatliner's arms and legs and starts moving them in a dancing fashion.:::
Gabriel: Check this out man...look I'm doing the robot. :::The two chuckle.:::
Exodus: Yeah, well I just want to tell you (Exodus extends Holocaust's hand to Flatliner.)..."Thank you very much a Mr. Roboto. Domo, domo, da domo domo.
Gabriel: I can't believe the Syndicate actually expects these things to beat us, they're more like a toy then a terror these days.
Exodus: I know, tell me about it, but we'll just keep playing with them and toying around until we get our shot at the aCe Tag Titles.
:::At this point Amazing Mann walks up as he is hanging up his holophone.:::
Amazing Mann: Hey, get away from them. :::Exodus and Gabriel walk away laughing.::: Damn, rats with wings, I swear. :::Amazing Mann continues mumbling as he inspects his stablemates as we head to a different area backstage. Standing by is Nemean with Godsend!:::
Nemean: My guest here tonight obliterated the monster Paganax in a Coffin Match, then followed up with an impressive victory last week. What are your plans for this week, oh Demon from beyond?
Godsend: My plans are to make another example. I'm going to destroy everyone until I get my shot at the Essence.
Nemean: And pretell, who is the example tonight.
:::Godsend leans in and give an eerie whisper.:::
Godsend: You are. :::Godsend punches Nemean and starts beating him as Nemean stumbles to get away and heads towards the ring area.
Godsend vs. Nemean Godsend defeated Nemean with a HELL'S THRESHOLD Match Rating: 1.00 Match Notes: After the match Godsend didn't stop his attack. He pounded Nemean shot after shot and left Nemean in a bloody mess. The fans booed loudly as Godsend posed over his fallen opponent and made a gesture around his waist in the shape of a title.
- House of Pain Prepares - :::Backstage we see PainMaster slowly undoing the chains from Mr. Bloat. Mr. Bloat grabs ahold of Sycophant and slaps him a few times. Sycophant just smiles and looks at PainMaster who yells out an emphatic "YES! YES! YES!!!":::
:::The announcers talk about the upcoming match and the unusual and demented individuals that House of Pain are, then they ask "Is Totalis really ready for this?":::
Totalis and Pendragon vs. Sycophant and Master and Mr. Bloat Totalis defeated Sycophant the Deviant with a FINAL ROUND Match Rating: 1.00 Match Notes: Pendragon made the tag to Totalis who took control of the match. PainMaster and Mr. Bloat double teamed Pendragon on the outside, while Totalis hit the FINAL ROUND on Sycophant. When the match was over Totalis posed then exited right past House of Pain going to work on Pendragon. PainMaster was still shouting orders at Mr. Bloat as he continued his assault on Pendragon as the show went off the air.
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Post by Tournament Master on May 7, 2008 15:29:49 GMT -5
Was there any doubt that I was going to win the Main Event?
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Post by jmello on May 7, 2008 16:17:22 GMT -5
The best part is he stayed true to his character and after winning just let House of Pain do whatever to Pendragon. That Totalis, what a fun character.
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Post by Alexander Ubel on May 7, 2008 18:49:52 GMT -5
Nice card. Looking forward to the Totalis/Avarice rematch.
I also like how your playing Ventross, look forward to more.
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