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Post by trent987 on Jun 25, 2013 23:31:54 GMT -5
just made this here for practice.
sorry about the jagged/crooked writing with the numbers in some parts///lol(was in a rush to type) any suggestions welcome,but to give a background on the character.just a straight up pure wrestler,no real gimmick...just kind of a fusion of kurt angle,bret hart,some rick steiner and a bit of japanese mat wrestling
level 1 offense level 1 defense
1.arm drag-1 1.hurt-2
2.european uppercut-1 2.dazed-1
3.headlock-1 3.euphoria-1
4.belly to back suplex(pw) 4.euphoria-1
6.russian leg sweep-3(ch c) 5.dazed(tag)
6.dazed-1
level 2 offense level 2 defense
1.head into turnbuckle 1.hurt
2.pointed elbow to neck-2 2.dazed-1
3.into the ropes 3.hurt-2(tag)
4.strong lariat(steinerline)-2(ch b) 4.euphoria-2
5.t-bone suplex-3 5.euphoria-1
6.super german suplex-3 6.dazed-1
level 3 offense level 3 defense
1.dragon sleeper-3 1.down-3
2.full nelson lock-3 2.hurt-2
3.out of ring(c) 3.hurt-2
4.leg vine lock-3 4.PIN 7(4)
5.triangle choke-3 5.down-3
6.TIGER SUPLEX-(+2)finisher
ropes-a agility -2
turnbuckle-a power-2
ring-a cage-3
deathjump-c
disqualification-5
name origin ht.6'1'
euphoria U.S.A. wt.232 lbs...
affiliation:loner/ face
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Post by TTX on Jun 26, 2013 19:01:46 GMT -5
all right, some things to fix out
you need a move on slot 5 of level 1 offense and something for defense level 3 slot 6
ch C and ch F should follow level 2 moves (along with A and B) D and E after level 3 moves (along with G and H)
However in this case, I'd drop it as you need a deathjump option
put a -2 after head into turnbuckle on level 2 offense make it -2 (ag) otherwise make the Russian Leg Sweep on level 1 offense -3 (ag)
switch out of the ring and full nelson lock to streamline things
make move 1 -3 (ch G) or (ch H) on level 3 offense
You may want to tone down the defense on level 2 make a dazed a hurt
You might want to put a (lv) option on one of the downs on level 3
Pretty good effort overall
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Post by trent987 on Jun 26, 2013 19:06:00 GMT -5
thanks so much troy i appreciate that alot and for the suggestions...me being a rook at these things i just needed an experienced gamer's opinion...glad i got it...awesome,much appreciated man ...now i know what works and what doesn't..that's all i needed...:)i know there are little intricacies to these things that are a little deeper than just throwing stats together
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Post by TTX on Jun 26, 2013 19:14:26 GMT -5
All bootlegs take is a lot of practice and a general knowledge of the rules. You'll do just fine;)
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Post by Justin Case on Jun 26, 2013 20:51:16 GMT -5
I guess this is what I'd do for it? Similar to what Troy said, but I tried to keep it close to what you had. The only minor difference I'd change is the dragon sleeper - 3 and made that a dragon sleeper - 2. Pretty cool character overall. Three of my favorites you used as inspiration, so I dig it! Keep working at it! It gets easier with time!  | EUPHORIA | Height: 6'1"; Weight: 232 lbs.; Home: U.S.A. | | Level 1 Offense | Level 1 Defense | 1. arm drag-1
2. European uppercut-1
3. headlock-1
4. belly to back suplex-2(pw)
5. dropkick - 2 (ag)
6. Russian leg sweep-3 | 1. hurt-2
2. dazed-1
3. EUPHORIA-1
4. EUPHORIA-1
5. dazed-1 (tag)
6. dazed-1 | | Level 2 Offense | Level 2 Defense | 1. head into turnbuckle-2
2. pointed elbow to neck-2
3. into the ropes (c)
4. strong lariat(Steinerline)-2(ch B)
5. T-bone Suplex-3
6. Super German Suplex-3 | 1. hurt-2
2. dazed-1
3. hurt-2(tag)
4. EUPHORIA-2
5. EUPHORIA-1
6. hurt-2 | | Level 3 Offense | Level 3 Defense | 1. dragon sleeper-2
2. full nelson lock-3 (Ch G)
3. out of ring(c)
4. leg vine lock-3
5. triangle choke-3
6. TIGER SUPLEX(+2) | 1. down-3 (lv)
2. hurt-2
3. hurt-2
4. PIN 7(4)
5. down-3
6. down-3 | Ropes -- A
Turnbuckle -- A
Ring -- A
Deathjump -- C
Disqualification 5 | Agility -2
Power -2
Cage 3 |
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Post by trent987 on Jun 27, 2013 4:45:05 GMT -5
AWESOME...!thanks justin....yeah it's quite fun and i've only made one character...lol!..thanks for the tweaking you did on that....now i know how to do it properly...  |
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Post by TTX on Jun 27, 2013 5:20:11 GMT -5
Justin is really cool in helping get things done from helping with characters, to doing PDFs and artwork
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Post by Justin Case on Jun 27, 2013 7:31:15 GMT -5
Justin is really cool in helping get things done from helping with characters, to doing PDFs and artwork Ya, always willing to lend a hand here and there for folks that ask! Like Troy said, if you ever want some artwork or it set up for printer ready print offs via PDF files, just let me know. If we do that, we can put it in the archives here on this board for download for other people who are interested in using the character in their play! It's a great way to contribute to the community, a way to give back to a great game! Something to think about in the future! |
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Post by Crossbones on Jun 27, 2013 8:36:31 GMT -5
Justin is really cool in helping get things done from helping with characters, to doing PDFs and artwork I couldn't have done mine without the support of Justin and other people in the community. Trent, what I would do is play test your character you created by running him through a gauntlet of single wrestlers. Stage one: Mutant Stage two: Comrade Terror Stage three: Death Knight Stage four: Commander Sam Stage five: Lord Nexus Stage six: Killer Queen stage seven: Genghis Khan stage eight:Krakan Stage nine: Exo-King stage ten: Wolf stage eleven: Thantos stage twelve: Star Warrior |
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Post by trent987 on Jun 27, 2013 20:48:53 GMT -5
thanks aplex:)...yeah i ran him against krakan already and he won...so i guess it's a solid character from the stats i put in...only those other 23 to go...lol...gonna try the guantlet thing definitely...and thanks troy and justin...justin i pictured this character in just a traditional amateur wrestling attire(like kurt angle)but with radicaly designed kinda tripped out colors(just to spice it up a bit)and possibly a dark eagle logo...so he looks like a traditional wrestling machine,but with an edge to him...just kinda my idea...:)if i ever get my printer set up i'll let you know....thanks again man!
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