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Post by Eliath on Mar 16, 2009 15:31:46 GMT -5
*STANDING OVATION*
Congrats to Sledgend on a magnificant match & to the Undergrads for an equally impressive result!!
I really like how you are writing Mot & Kram...excellent job!
I believe that this is the first time that The Messenger has ever hit his 6,6,6 series to max out his finisher! I'm happy to see it finally happen for someone. He has come close for me a couple times but never quite got there for me. ;D I love the storyline you are building for him too...thanks!
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Mar 16, 2009 16:30:21 GMT -5
I had a lot of fun writing up this card.
I have some grand plans in store for The Messenger and him hitting the 6,6,6 series was just awesome! It set things up perfectly.
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Mar 16, 2009 19:50:21 GMT -5
In The Zone : 02 (1.2) [/size] Overtime vs Salvage
The Z-Division Championship Narcotik vs Leviathan
Heavy Metal vs Titan Pain
Morbid vs Surgeon
Torn vs Tyrro
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Post by Eliath on Mar 16, 2009 21:01:08 GMT -5
[/size] Overtime vs Salvage
The Z-Division Championship Narcotik vs Leviathan
Heavy Metal vs Titan Pain
Morbid vs Surgeon
Torn vs Tyrro
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Post by swarm on Mar 16, 2009 23:53:12 GMT -5
Wow! I had to log in to say this is one of the best Z feds I have ever read! Loved the swerve with Rocket and the Undergrads! I can totally see the Headliners as faces too...
Very impressed to see The Messenger hit a +6 THE MESSAGE! First time I've seen it!
Great work! Looking forward to more!
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Mar 17, 2009 23:17:07 GMT -5
In The Zone : 02 (1.2) [/size] The show opened with a video package featuring Sledgend and the incredible Shattering Devastation.
Mot & Kram, "Welcome to IN... THE... ZONE!"Mot, "Tonight we will see Overtime try and get the upperhand against Salvage in our main event."Kram, "Hold on Mot I am receiving word of a commotion in the back, lets cut to the action."The cameras cut to Commissioner Nexus' office, the door kicked in. The Messenger is standing over the fallen Nexus, blood pouring from his forehead.
Nightmare Nikki leans down and kisses Nexus gently on the forehead and tastes his blood.
The Messenger, "Do you get the message now Nexus? Next time you may not be so lucky."The pair leave the office as medical crew rush in to aid Nexus.
Mot, "OH MY GOD! You can expect a response from The Six for sure."Kram, "The Messenger has definitely crossed a line. We can only wait and see what the repercussions are going to be."Mot, "It looks like we are ready for our opening match so lets go to the ring."Torn vs PridePride busted Torn open after a third Patriot Missile but Torn was able to fight back and the action ended up on the outside where to the shock of fans Pride was disqualified after he accidentally caught the referee with a kick while trying to hit Torn. Pride looked shocked and tried to apologize but the referee refused to reverse his decision, during the argument, Torn stepped in and blasted Pride with a jet of fire. Torn, "How does it feel to be TRAUMATIZED?"Kram, "Despicable actions on the part of Pride. Attacking the referee to escape the match. Luckily Torn was there to protect the official before further harm to come to him."Mot looks at his partner sideways, "Are you joking?! I don't think we have heard the last of this between these two."Before the match between Morbid and the Surgeon could get underway the action cut to the backstage area where a brawl between The Messenger and Ensor was in progress. Ensor blasted The Messenger into the wall and leveled him with a series of punches.
Ensor, "Your villainy will not go unpunished evil one! I challenge you to meet me in the ring tonight."Before the fallen Messenger could answer Ensor was hit with LD50 from Leviathan and Xymbiote stood over him with a wicked dagger in hand.
The Messenger rose to his feet, "Stop!" I accept your challenge and when I leave you broken in the middle of the ring...You Will Get The Message!"The Messenger delivered a wicked shot before the Death Club walked away.
Mot, "Can you believe it! We are getting another high profile match tonight."Kram, "What I can't believe is how these so called hero types think ambushing people is the 'right' thing to do."Mot, "But its ok for people like Overtime and The Messenger to do these things?"Kram, "Of course...their the villains."Mot, "Your not all there are you?"(The Surgeon vs Morbid match was scrapped)Heavy Metal vs Titan PainMotor Psycho was able to overpower Stryker and shoved him to the mat forcing him to mat the tag to Revelation. Revelation hit a Sunset Dropkick as he came into the ring and Titan Pain hit the LAST CHAPTER. Grash came in and made the save but as the referee was ushering him from the ring Revelation locked an already down Motor Psycho in CONFESSION and scored the win for his team. Revelation pointed at Grash and then at his Steel Championship before he and Stryker exited the ring. Kram, "Great match! Titan Pain showed Heavy Metal who was in control tonight."Mot, "It looks like Revelation wants to take on Grash in singles action for the Steel Championship."Kram, "That will be a tough climb, given the ability of Grash but these Titans are no pushovers."Mot, "Up next is a Z-Division Championship match featuring Leviathan as the challenger."Narcotik vs LeviathanNarcotik was all over Leviathan and kept dropping him with a running enziguri every time he tried to rise. To his credit Leviathan was able to get a foot on the ropes after Narcotik's finisher. Leviathan tired of the beating and rolled from the ring to try and regroup, Narcotik followed him out and Leviathan leveled the Z-Division Champion with his own belt forcing the disqualification. Johnny Rocket called The Undergrads out before Leviathan could continue his attack and the brawl was soon joined by Xybiote. The Death Club was driven off but not before Pariah issued a challenge for next week. Leviathan smiled wickedly and Xymbiote licked his lips as they backed up the ramp.
Mot, "There is a whole lot of action going on tonight!"Kram, "You got that right and we still have two more matches to go!"Salvage vs OvertimeTwo weeks in a row Overtime was overconfident after catching Salvage with THE CLINCHER. Overtime climbed back to the top turnbuckle and jumped, hitting Salvage with a cross body block. Things looked bleak but Salvage rolled through and scored an upset pin on Overtime. Salvage rolled from the ring to escape yet another tantrum from Overtime. Overtime, "What the hell is wrong with the officiating here. You are all conspiring to keep me down. I demand Nexus come out here now and make things right!"The referee tells Overtime something before the Titan shoves him to the mat.
Overtime, "Next week Salvage! This time in a Titan Death Match!"Salvage looks at Overtime and smiles, "You got it...Punk!"Overtime seethed and jumped from the ring and the two men had to be separated by security.
Kram, "Yet again Salvage cheats Overtime out of a clear victory."Mot, "I don't know about that, but next week there aren't going to be any excuses."The Messenger vs EnsorThe Messenger took some shots from Ensor to start but The Messenger was able to get on offense and never let up. He looked to repeat the series he used on Assassin Z but fell short of his goal. Ensor was planted with a wicked looking Terminator Piledriver and lay in the ring unmoving (snake eyes). Mot, "I think The Messenger just killed Ensor. He needs some medical attention for sure."Kram, "Guess Ensor got The Message!"Mot, "Your sick you know that!"Medical crew made it to the ring and The Messenger stood in the corner smiling as they placed a brace on Ensor's neck and took him from the ring.
The Messenger, "Nexus...his injury is on your head. Just like my next victim."The Messenger and Nightmare Nikki left the ring.
Mot & Kram, "See You Next Week IN... THE... ZONE!"
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Mar 17, 2009 23:31:05 GMT -5
On the next edition of In The Zone you will see :
Revelation takes on Grash for the Steel Championship.
Leviathan & Xymbiote answer the challenge of The Undergrads in a non-title tag match.
Overtime and Salvage go at it one more time in a Titan Death Match.
Stellar Nexus responds to the attack by The Messenger last week.
[/color] An update on Ensor's condition.The match scrapped last week. The Surgeon vs Morbidand...The Messenger takes on G.Q. Stratus
for the right to face Sledgend at the next GWFZ PPV[/center]
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Post by Eliath on Mar 18, 2009 4:55:19 GMT -5
WOW!! Another AMAZING CARD!!!
This fed is on fire right now!!
I loved Kram's reaction to Pride kicking the ref...hilarious!
Another big win for Salvage...Overtime is getting himself in deeper & deeper. Next week there is no escape but I think he might have something planned...
The Messenger...WOW!
First an attack on Stellar Nexus then "ambushed" by Ensor...
My favorite line of the night: "Mot, "I think The Messenger just killed Ensor." For some reason I laughed out loud when I read this. Perhaps because I can see Tom saying it if he were the commentator. Good stuff!
I'm really impressed with everything you have going on here! Keep it up!!
Next week picks: Grash Undergrads Overtime Morbid The Messenger
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Post by captaincold on Mar 18, 2009 8:59:01 GMT -5
On the next edition of In The Zone you will see :
Revelation takes on Grash for the Steel Championship.
Leviathan & Xymbiote answer the challenge of The Undergrads in a non-title tag match.
Overtime and Salvage go at it one more time in a Titan Death Match.
Stellar Nexus responds to the attack by The Messenger last week.
[/color] An update on Ensor's condition.The match scrapped last week. The Surgeon vs Morbidand...The Messenger takes on G.Q. Stratus
for the right to face Sledgend at the next GWFZ PPV[/center][/quote]
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Mar 18, 2009 16:42:49 GMT -5
In The Zone 03 (1.3) [/size] The show opens on a tight shot of Stellar Nexus, a clear line of stitches in his forehead.
Nexus, "I don't know who you think you are Messenger, but surly you didn't think by attacking me you would be in line for a title shot. I didn't make the match between you and G.Q. Stratus and I don't know how it got announced but you can forget it. I have an opponent lined up for Stratus tonight and its not you. Messenger you are hereby suspended for 5 cards and fined 10,000 credits. I will not be intimidated into making decisions. You want to impress me? Impress me in the ring."
Mot, "It looks like our Commissioner just laid down the law around here."
Kram, "You can bet The Messenger isn't gong to be happy about what just happened."
Mot, "Lets go to the ring for our first match of the evening."
Surgeon vs Morbid Morbid and Surgeon traded blows and at one point the Surgeon injected something into Morbid, but all this did was set off the hardcore fighter and he beat the holy hell out of the Surgeon and used MORBIDLY CRUEL to secure the win. Surgeon was yelling for Justin Case to do something but he was to busy on his phone to notice.
Mot, "I can't believe the Surgeon tried to win by sticking Morbid with that needle of his."
Kram, "He was simply doing a blood test."
Mot, "A blood test? What the hell for?"
Kram, "Did you see the way Morbid flew into a rage? It was obviously drugs. Too bad Mr. Case was on the phone with the authorities. His client needed assistance."
Mot sighs, "Lets take it to the ring for the Titan Death Match between Salvage and Overtime."
Salvage vs Overtime Overtime dominated Salvage and was out to make a point. Overtime hit THE CLINCHER early but was unable to secure the pin. Overtime hit Salvage with his finisher three more times before going to the top rope. Overtime crashed and burned and Salvage hit Overtime with a Salvage Slam setting him up for ROAD TO REDEMPTION. The crowd was on their feet, but Salvage never got a chance to hit the move as Stryker hit Salvage from behind and he and Revelation hit LAST CHAPTER. Overtime scored the win after the attack and stood over his fallen opponent as if he had won a championship.
Kram, "Overtime redeems himself by scoring a hard fought victory over that oaf Salvage."
Mot, "Yeah but not without the help of his teammates."
Kram, "Thats why its called a 'Titan' Death Match."
The Undergrads vs Death Club Xymbiote just wasn't able to pull anything together against Pariah and was forced to tag out. Leviathan came in and received the same treatment, but as Pariah went for his finisher, Leviathan hit him with a blast of LD50. This prompted Magnifico to jump into the ring and Xymbiote soon followed. The referee was unable to restore order and threw the match out declaring it a no contest.
Mot, "Well that one sure broke down."
Kram, "You can say that again. These teams definitely have it out for each other. I expect to see a rematch."
Mot, "We have just received word that Ensor suffered an impact injury to his neck do to the piledriver he took last week and could be out for the next month."
Kram, "That goody two shoes got what was coming to him after his cowardly attack on The Messenger. Now its time for the cage to be activated as Revelation challenges Grash for the Steel Championship."
Grash vs Revelation This one was almost over early as Grash wasted no time in hitting the TENDERIZER. Revelation was able to kick out and regained the advantage and after a short offense of his own put Grash down with CONFESSION to claim the Steel Championship. Revelation hoisted the belt high as the cage was deactivated and was snatched up from behind by Salvage and planted with the ROAD TO REDEMPTION. Salvage picked up Revelation's newly won title and walked out.
Kram, "That Salvage is a thief! Commissioner Nexus needs to do something about this!"
Mot, "That may be, but it looks like Salvage wants a shot at revenge for what the Titan's pulled tonight."
Kram, "Well fans get ready for tonights main event. This match is for the opportunity to face Sledgend at Battle Line II for the GWFZ Championship."
G.Q. Stratus makes his entrance and awaits his opponent.
The crowd is shocked as a familiar tune begins to play and Sly Drury makes his GWFZ debut!
Sly Drury vs G.Q. Stratus Stratus was unprepared for his opponent and Drury used Flaunt The Law several times to soften Stratus up before delivering a jaw shattering CRIME LORD to secure the victory and become the new number one contender in his debut match.
Mot, "That was a decisive debut! I can't believe Sly Drury is here in the GWFZ."
Kram, "Thats a hell of a draw there. Drury is one of the GWF's top men and now looks to be the favorite to capture the GWFZ Championship."
Mot, "Thats all for tonight folks, see you next time on..."
Mot & Kram, "IN... THE... ZONE!"
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