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Post by cakejedi on Aug 3, 2013 14:27:02 GMT -5
Your fed is on my 'must read' list. Just GREAT STUFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really enjoyed the Tantos/Star Warrior vs. Ensor/Payback match. Everything from the cocky heel post match promo to the heel turn by Ensor was brilliantly written. The same can be siad for the Endgame and Nosfera brawl from the previous card. Your writing is EXCELLENT. You describe the action perfectly and you capture the essence of the characters like few can. Keep it up and I will keep reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 4, 2013 3:19:21 GMT -5
thanks for the reading and responding!!
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 4, 2013 3:24:12 GMT -5
GWF Special Report:
Earlier, as most of the GWF was settling in on Aethra for the 3-Card Aethran War Tour, war broke out, leaving a hotel lobby desolate and nearly destroyed. Witnesses claim that the Gladiators, Aethran Overmaster, Paralyze, and the current Tag Team Champions, Rush & Turmoil, were all in the lobby of the local Aethran Palace Hotel, the hotel usually booked by the GWF for staff and those on the roster, to stay in while the GWF visits Aethra. GWF Champion, Monolith, arrived, with a large group of security. It is reported that due to the very bad blood between the Aethrans (both those in the GWF and those who are simply Aethrans) and Monolith, Euritar ordered a squad of security to follow Monolith...apparently for his own “protection”.
Continuing with the report, though...as Monolith made his way through the lobby, Overmaster was overheard saying that if Monolith “was not the coward that he is, he would make our match a Title Match. Only cowards sign non-title matches.” Monolith, who was visibly irritated to begin with, heard the comments from Overmaster, and shoved his way past his own security to confront the Aethran Leader. Overmaster stood eye to eye with Monolith, until Rush decided to throw their alcoholic drink in the face of Monolith. Distracted by the drink in his face and eyes, Aethran Overmaster attacked with a huge forearm to the face, then slammed Monolith face-first into a concrete pillar in the lobby!! Monolith recovered enough to try fighting back, but Paralyze, Rush & Turmoil joined in on the attack. The security detail finally reacted to the fight, but it was too little, too late, as the Aethrans and Monolith were in full brawl.
Finally, after what witnesses claimed were several minutes, and after the hotel lobby was nearly destroyed, the members of Fight Club (Tag Team #1 Contenders, The Ultimate Fighters, and Patch) walked in and saw Monolith trying to fight off 4 men, and they too joined in the fight, helping Monolith. After several more moments, Aethran Military Police arrived and the 8 men were finally separated.
Later in the afternoon, GWF Commissioner Euritar, made the announcement that the Main Event of the first card of the Aethran War Tour, would be changed. Instead of Aethran Overmaster vs. Monolith in a non-title match, both men would be added to the Fight Club/Gladiator tag match, and that match would then be in an Aethran Ultimate Escape Match. In fact, Euritar has decided to turn All Roads Leading into a Aethran Ultimate Escape Match Tournament between 4 of the teams now competing in Aethran Ultimate Escape Matches. Who makes up the four teams?
1. Gladiators of Aethra (Aethran Overmaster, Paralyze, Rush & Turmoil) 2. Fight Club (TUF & Patch) & Monolith 3. FDF (Endgame, Tauran, PSI & HelSin) 4. Team Black Death (Harbinger, Oracle, and Cage Rage)
Another note from the Commissioner's office: Overmaster has been added to the Main Event of GWF #7 GalactiCard I: “Darkest Death, Gleaming Glory”, making the match a Fatal Four Way for the GWF Galaxian Championship (Aethran Overmaster vs. Endgame vs. Harbinger vs. Monolith [GWF Champion]).
Here is the line-up so far for GWF #6:
BD Revolution & Nosfera vs. Council of War
Swarm, Payback, Overtime, and a “surprise partner” vs. The Legends (Hector, Star Warrior, Thantos, & newest member and former tag team partner of Payback, Ensor)
And then the 4-Team Aethran Ultimate Escape Tournament.
This will prove to be a HUGE show for the GWF, as they are making planet-fall on the war-torn Aethra (large portions of Aethra is still devastated by the coup of Overmaster when he overthrew Spike's regime). You do not want to miss GWF #6: “All Roads Leading...”
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Post by cakejedi on Aug 4, 2013 17:56:33 GMT -5
Another great post. The hotel lobby brawl was exciting to read about. An Aethrean Ultimate Escape match tournamant! What a GREAT idea!!!!!! I can't wait to read the results.
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 6, 2013 9:01:49 GMT -5
GWF #6 (The Aethran War Tour Card #1/3) "All Roads Leading..." @ Aethra War Dome, Aethra*The show opens up with the announce team (Hype, Dialectus & Abroz) discussing the recent brawl that happened between Monolith vs. the Gladiators, with a late entrance by Fight Club. Before they could get too into the discussion, though, the Aethran War Anthem blared across the sound system of the massive Aethra War Dome, followed by the Aethran Overmaster, Paralyze, and the the GWF Tag Team Champions, Rush & Turmoil...
Overmaster: Tonight, the Aethran race can sleep proud, knowing, watching, reveling in the fact that the GWF and the so-called Black Death, will have been humbled by your leader...us Aethrans must unite to destroy all those who stand opposed to us. That includes the likes of the traitors, Havoc and woman-slave Strafe. It includes the the “moral light of the GWF”, Endgame. It includes the pathetic leader of the Black Death, Harbinger. And it especially includes Monolith. Yes, tonight, the Aethrans take their rightful place on the throne of the GWF, as we conquer all that needs to be conquered. The FDF, the Black Death, Fight Club, and that conglomeration of fools, Swarm and his Titan friends. Tonight, we...
Overmaster is cut off by the appearance of...Harbinger!! Harbinger and his Black Death team are standing at the entrance ramp, with Harbinger holding a mic...
Harbinger: Overmaster, do you understand why no Aethrans were converted to the Black Death? It is not as you claim...you are not so strong of mind that you cannot be possessed. Oh no, it has nothing to do with your strength of mind (Harbinger smirks at that statement). It is because you have a weak rage, you have a weak strength, and you have such a weak mind, there would be nothing left once the greatness of the Black Death overtook you. What you have is a weakness of being, Overmaster...and not just you, every single Aethran in existence...except the prime examples of rage: Havoc and Alpha Female. The two you continue to dodge. But their time is coming, and your time of doom will soon be upon you, Overmaster. And that time will be tonight, on your home planet.
With that, the Black Death vanished into the back, leaving the raucous Aethran crowd shouting obscenities towards the Black Death...6-Man Tag Team MatchThe Council of War (Military Powers & Retribution) vs. BD Revolution & Nosfera - Alpha Female forces Tharkas to quickly submit to DIRE STRAPH (Tharkas immediately complained that he DID NOT submit, and began to claim referee bias...but the referee's decision was final, and a quick replay by the announcers shown that Tharkas did indeed, submit) - Alpha Female eliminates Paganax after locking him in the DIRE STRAPH - Alpha Female eliminates Retribution via SLAVE NO MORE >BD Retribution & Nosfera are the survivors *Nosfera blasts Retribution with THE DEMON'S BREATH, sending him reeling to the outside. Before Nosfera could turn around, though, he is leveled by Havoc who nails him Wreaking Havoc (RKO), immediately followed up with Alpha Female locking on the DIRE STRAPH!! Out to the ring comes Balaal and Oracle...who also joins in on the attack!! After several minutes of the brutal beat-down (and nobody coming out to help the hated demon), Tricks rushes the ring and launches an attack on Oracle!! The viciousness of the crazed psychopathic assault stuns the Black Death team members, sending them scurrying for cover!! The fans stand in stunned silence, not sure whether they should cheer for Black Death being sent packing, or jeer because one of the most hated men in the GWF, Tricks, helped another most hated, Nosfera...Nonetheless, the Black Death regrouped, and laughed towards the clown before simply leaving...8-Man Tag Team MatchThe Legends (Hector, The GameMasters, and Ensor) vs. Swarm, Payback, Overtime and (The Legends were in the ring, with Ensor looking very agitated, pacing back and forth, when Swarm, Payback and Overtime made their way out from the back...Swarm had the mic, and said that they have in their corner...a mysterious man, who is neither good or evil, but he is black...a masked figure slid out from under the ring, and jumped up onto the apron, then the top rope and landed a double flying clothesline to both Star Warrior & Thantos, sending the two GameMasters out of the ring!! Who was the masked man??? Swarm, Payback & Overtime stormed the ring, then, and a wild 8-man brawl erupted and lasted for several minutes, until finally, the referee had no choice but to throw the match out, calling the match a NO DECISION!!) >The Legends and Swarm, Payback, Overtime and the “Mystery Partner” battle to a NO DECISION *The brawl continued for several more minutes, threatening to really shut down the show, when bad went to worse, as members of the Black Death stormed the ring and entered the fray!! Bishop Hell, Mantis, Death Masque Betrayer, and Balaal joined in on the brawl, making it 3 teams of 4 men battling each other all over the arena!! After many more minutes, finally, GWF officials were able to get things under control...and the Aethran crowd was in a state of frenzy and bloodlust!! Aethran Ultimate Escape Match 4-Team TournamentROUND ONE Team Black Death (Harbinger, Oracle, BD Cage Rage) vs. FDF (Endgame, Tauran, PSI, HelSin) Gladiators of Aethra (Aethran Overmaster, Paralyze, Rush & Turmoil) vs. Fight Club & Monolith (Ultimate Fighters, Patch, Monolith)Team Black Death (Harbinger, Oracle, BD Cage Rage) vs. FDF (Endgame, Tauran, PSI, HelSin) - Harbinger escapes the cage after 2 PORTENTS OF DOOM to PSI - Oracle escapes after blasting PSI with DARK FUTURES - Endgame escapes after a Rydeen Bomb to Cage Death Betrayer - HelSin escapes after a STAKE TO THE HEART on Anivar - PSI escapes after reversing a face-slam into the cage on Anivar - Cage Death Betrayer escapes after locking Tauran in NO ESCAPE - Tauran escapes after planting Anivar with a top rope exploder slam to win the match >The FDF win the match, leaving Anivar in the cage (FDF ADVANCES TO THE FINAL ROUND) Fight Club (TUF & Patch) & Monolith (GWF Champ) vs. Gladiators of Aethra (Aethran Overmaster, Paralyze, Rush & Turmoil [GWF Tag Team Champs]) - Rush escapes the cage quickly after CHAOS IN THE CROWD on Patch - Paralyze escapes after PERMANENTLY PARALYZED on Patch - Aethran Overmaster escapes after a deathjump on Patch - Patch escapes after TORTURE RACK PATCH WORK on Turmoil - Monolith escapes after harpooning Turmoil into the cage - Shoot escapes after locking Turmoil in TAPPED OUT! - Clinch escapes after KNOCKED OUT (FLYING KICK TO HEAD KO) >Fight Club & Monolith win the match, leaving Turmoil in the cage (FIGHT CLUB & MONOLITH ADVANCE TO THE FINAL ROUND) *At the loss of the Aethrans in their own match tournament, the fans in attendance at the Aethran War Dome went into a flurry of unrest, especially when Overmaster and the rest of the Gladiators attacked the team that had just defeated them!! A riot completely took over, which basically shut the show down, as officials stepped in to try to regain control...but the Aethran crowds were too far gone in anger and outcry at the fact that the Gladiators were eliminated from the tournament!! After several hours of insane violence (the GWF staff & wrestlers were escorted from the arena by way of underground tunnels designed for VIP's and high ranking Aethran Officials to escape danger. For hours, the riot lasted in the War Dome, and the War Dome burned...
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 6, 2013 9:14:16 GMT -5
Some questions to be answered...
1. Who was the masked "mystery parnter" who was supposed to tag with Swarm, Payback & Overtime?
2. What about the finals to the Aethran Ultimate Escape Match Tournament? The riot that took place after the Gladiators were eliminated caused the final match (Fight Club & Monolith vs. FDF) to not take place...
3. Nosfera is injured, and will now be out for at least a little while. But why did the Black Death kick him to the curb? And why was it Tricks that eventually made the save?
4. BD Revolution has officially challenged Rush & Turmoil for the Tag Team Titles. The simple fact that Revolution won their 6-man tag match without any help from partner, Nosfera, has Euritar looking into it. Could they join the tag team title match on GalactiCard I between TUF vs. Rush & Turmoil?
5. The next show is GalactiCard I...big matches are signed for the card. Monolith, Aethran Overmaster, Endgame, and Harbinger are all vying for the GWF Title in a Fatal Four Way. Who will come out on top, and head into the Impossible Tournament 2127 as the Champion?
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 6, 2013 12:43:36 GMT -5
Next up will be my "WrestleMania"...GalactiCard I!!
Here is the line up for the show...
GalactiCard I: "Darkest Death, Gleaming Glory"
Tricks vs. Oracle in a Nightmare Matrix - It was only a matter of time until these two former partners clash. Tricks, for some reason, came to the rescue of Nosfera on GWF #6. Why? He has not really said, other than "I am a clown, I do things that never makes sense...not even to me". Oracle has stated that Tricks' mind-games will not work on his superior intellect. Who knows how this one will end up...
Patch vs. Paralyze in a Rylock Rod Match - Patch has set his "eye" on the Aethrans. Paralyze has accepted the challenge, but the match will be in Paralyze's own specialty match. This one should be brutal.
Master Race vs. BD Revolution in a GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles Top Shot Match - Revolution was very impressive on GWF #6, as they eliminated all 3 members of the Council of War (actually, Alpha Female eliminated each member) without once tagging out to partner, Nosfera. Euritar has decided to put one more test before the former Aethrans: defeat the Master Race. Whoever wins this match earns a title shot later on the show, challenging either TUF or Rush & Turmoil. Revolution wants their opponents to be the Gladiators, Rush & Turmoil. The Master Race doesn't care either way. But, of important note, The Master Race have not been getting along too well, lately. Will they be able to pull together as the tight and well-oiled team that dominated the tag team ranks their first year in the GWF? Or will Revolution run over them? One of these two teams could very well leave GalactiCard as the Tag Team Champions.
HelSin vs. Coven Black - This is a blood feud that does not look like it will see the dawn of a new day for quite some time. Coven Black still lays claim to HelSin's former love, Mistress of Darkness. HelSin still wants to destroy Coven Black. On GalactiCard I, these two clash once again...
The Ultimate Fighters vs. Rush & Turmoil (ch) for the GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles - TUF finally gets their shot. Rush & Turmoil are confident that they will stand, still as the champions, in the end. But this is only the first title defense...the winners of this match will later face the winners of the Master Race/Revolution match from earlier in the card. TUF and Rush & Turmoil already have no love lost between them. But then throw in the Master Race and Revolution in the mix...and this is a powder keg of tag team wrestling that is about to explode.
Swarm, Payback, Ensor, ? ? ? vs. The Legends (Hector, Thantos, Star Warrior, Ensor) vs. Balaal, Death Masque Betrayer, Mantis, Bishop Hell (IP Champ) in a 3-Way BattleZone Match - This should prove to be an incredible match. We still do not know who the masked "mystery partner" that was to be part of Swarm's team on GWF #6 was, but he will be involved in this match. Then you also have the Interplanetary Champion, Bishop Hell, involved, and this could be the big match of the night!! The rules for the IP Title? Bishop Hell's first match in will be a Title Defense. If he comes through that match, then he will have successfully defended the Title. If not, then the man who defeated him will then be Champion. He then must win his next match to retain the IP Title. If he does, then he will have successfully defended the Title. The Title will continue to be defended until one man successfully defends the Title, and once he has defended the Title successfully, the IP Title will no longer be up for grabs in this BattleZone Match. It will be interesting to see just when Bishop Hell makes his appearance, and who he will face in his title defense...
(Master Race OR Revolution) vs. (The Ultimate Fighters OR Rush & Turmoil) for the GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles
Tauran vs. Anivar in a Cosmic Cage Match - These two former partners and best friends will once again clash. Anivar is out of control with anger. Tauran is trying to make sense of it all. The fact is, Tauran will need to put aside his regret at needing to fight Anivar, and just simply step into the ring to not only win, but to survive...because Anivar is on a warpath, and is looking to not only defeat, but to destroy Tauran.
Harbinger vs. Endgame vs. Aethran Overmaster vs. Monolith (ch) in a Fatal Four Way Match for the GWF Galaxian Title - I know I said that the BattleZone Match could be the "big" match of the night...but honestly? We all know that this is the "Big One". The four top and most dominant stars in the GWF at this time will be stepping into the ring to battle one another for the glory of the GWF Title. This is going to be a historical match...
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Post by Eliath on Aug 6, 2013 13:16:27 GMT -5
Very impressive series of cards Mynnotar; I really enjoy reading your work - you have a fan going forward! Great job all around on your efforts.
Looking forward to Darkest Death, Gleaming Glory! Bring it on!!
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 6, 2013 13:23:56 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply!!
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Post by cakejedi on Aug 7, 2013 18:24:27 GMT -5
GWF #6 (The Aethran War Tour Card #1/3) "All Roads Leading..." @ Aethra War Dome, Aethra*The show opens up with the announce team (Hype, Dialectus & Abroz) discussing the recent brawl that happened between Monolith vs. the Gladiators, with a late entrance by Fight Club. Before they could get too into the discussion, though, the Aethran War Anthem blared across the sound system of the massive Aethra War Dome, followed by the Aethran Overmaster, Paralyze, and the the GWF Tag Team Champions, Rush & Turmoil...
Overmaster: Tonight, the Aethran race can sleep proud, knowing, watching, reveling in the fact that the GWF and the so-called Black Death, will have been humbled by your leader...us Aethrans must unite to destroy all those who stand opposed to us. That includes the likes of the traitors, Havoc and woman-slave Strafe. It includes the the “moral light of the GWF”, Endgame. It includes the pathetic leader of the Black Death, Harbinger. And it especially includes Monolith. Yes, tonight, the Aethrans take their rightful place on the throne of the GWF, as we conquer all that needs to be conquered. The FDF, the Black Death, Fight Club, and that conglomeration of fools, Swarm and his Titan friends. Tonight, we...
Overmaster is cut off by the appearance of...Harbinger!! Harbinger and his Black Death team are standing at the entrance ramp, with Harbinger holding a mic...
Harbinger: Overmaster, do you understand why no Aethrans were converted to the Black Death? It is not as you claim...you are not so strong of mind that you cannot be possessed. Oh no, it has nothing to do with your strength of mind (Harbinger smirks at that statement). It is because you have a weak rage, you have a weak strength, and you have such a weak mind, there would be nothing left once the greatness of the Black Death overtook you. What you have is a weakness of being, Overmaster...and not just you, every single Aethran in existence...except the prime examples of rage: Havoc and Alpha Female. The two you continue to dodge. But their time is coming, and your time of doom will soon be upon you, Overmaster. And that time will be tonight, on your home planet.
With that, the Black Death vanished into the back, leaving the raucous Aethran crowd shouting obscenities towards the Black Death...6-Man Tag Team MatchThe Council of War (Military Powers & Retribution) vs. BD Revolution & Nosfera - Alpha Female forces Tharkas to quickly submit to DIRE STRAPH (Tharkas immediately complained that he DID NOT submit, and began to claim referee bias...but the referee's decision was final, and a quick replay by the announcers shown that Tharkas did indeed, submit) - Alpha Female eliminates Paganax after locking him in the DIRE STRAPH - Alpha Female eliminates Retribution via SLAVE NO MORE >BD Retribution & Nosfera are the survivors *Nosfera blasts Retribution with THE DEMON'S BREATH, sending him reeling to the outside. Before Nosfera could turn around, though, he is leveled by Havoc who nails him Wreaking Havoc (RKO), immediately followed up with Alpha Female locking on the DIRE STRAPH!! Out to the ring comes Balaal and Oracle...who also joins in on the attack!! After several minutes of the brutal beat-down (and nobody coming out to help the hated demon), Tricks rushes the ring and launches an attack on Oracle!! The viciousness of the crazed psychopathic assault stuns the Black Death team members, sending them scurrying for cover!! The fans stand in stunned silence, not sure whether they should cheer for Black Death being sent packing, or jeer because one of the most hated men in the GWF, Tricks, helped another most hated, Nosfera...Nonetheless, the Black Death regrouped, and laughed towards the clown before simply leaving...8-Man Tag Team MatchThe Legends (Hector, The GameMasters, and Ensor) vs. Swarm, Payback, Overtime and (The Legends were in the ring, with Ensor looking very agitated, pacing back and forth, when Swarm, Payback and Overtime made their way out from the back...Swarm had the mic, and said that they have in their corner...a mysterious man, who is neither good or evil, but he is black...a masked figure slid out from under the ring, and jumped up onto the apron, then the top rope and landed a double flying clothesline to both Star Warrior & Thantos, sending the two GameMasters out of the ring!! Who was the masked man??? Swarm, Payback & Overtime stormed the ring, then, and a wild 8-man brawl erupted and lasted for several minutes, until finally, the referee had no choice but to throw the match out, calling the match a NO DECISION!!) >The Legends and Swarm, Payback, Overtime and the “Mystery Partner” battle to a NO DECISION *The brawl continued for several more minutes, threatening to really shut down the show, when bad went to worse, as members of the Black Death stormed the ring and entered the fray!! Bishop Hell, Mantis, Death Masque Betrayer, and Balaal joined in on the brawl, making it 3 teams of 4 men battling each other all over the arena!! After many more minutes, finally, GWF officials were able to get things under control...and the Aethran crowd was in a state of frenzy and bloodlust!! Aethran Ultimate Escape Match 4-Team TournamentROUND ONE Team Black Death (Harbinger, Oracle, BD Cage Rage) vs. FDF (Endgame, Tauran, PSI, HelSin) Gladiators of Aethra (Aethran Overmaster, Paralyze, Rush & Turmoil) vs. Fight Club & Monolith (Ultimate Fighters, Patch, Monolith)Team Black Death (Harbinger, Oracle, BD Cage Rage) vs. FDF (Endgame, Tauran, PSI, HelSin) - Harbinger escapes the cage after 2 PORTENTS OF DOOM to PSI - Oracle escapes after blasting PSI with DARK FUTURES - Endgame escapes after a Rydeen Bomb to Cage Death Betrayer - HelSin escapes after a STAKE TO THE HEART on Anivar - PSI escapes after reversing a face-slam into the cage on Anivar - Cage Death Betrayer escapes after locking Tauran in NO ESCAPE - Tauran escapes after planting Anivar with a top rope exploder slam to win the match >The FDF win the match, leaving Anivar in the cage (FDF ADVANCES TO THE FINAL ROUND) Fight Club (TUF & Patch) & Monolith (GWF Champ) vs. Gladiators of Aethra (Aethran Overmaster, Paralyze, Rush & Turmoil [GWF Tag Team Champs]) - Rush escapes the cage quickly after CHAOS IN THE CROWD on Patch - Paralyze escapes after PERMANENTLY PARALYZED on Patch - Aethran Overmaster escapes after a deathjump on Patch - Patch escapes after TORTURE RACK PATCH WORK on Turmoil - Monolith escapes after harpooning Turmoil into the cage - Shoot escapes after locking Turmoil in TAPPED OUT! - Clinch escapes after KNOCKED OUT (FLYING KICK TO HEAD KO) >Fight Club & Monolith win the match, leaving Turmoil in the cage (FIGHT CLUB & MONOLITH ADVANCE TO THE FINAL ROUND) *At the loss of the Aethrans in their own match tournament, the fans in attendance at the Aethran War Dome went into a flurry of unrest, especially when Overmaster and the rest of the Gladiators attacked the team that had just defeated them!! A riot completely took over, which basically shut the show down, as officials stepped in to try to regain control...but the Aethran crowds were too far gone in anger and outcry at the fact that the Gladiators were eliminated from the tournament!! After several hours of insane violence (the GWF staff & wrestlers were escorted from the arena by way of underground tunnels designed for VIP's and high ranking Aethran Officials to escape danger. For hours, the riot lasted in the War Dome, and the War Dome burned... Great card. I was disappointed that the finals to the Aethrean Escape match tournament never took place, but the riot was inevitable with the aethrean team losing in their own match in their home arena. The fans would naturally be enraged. Great piece of writing. Speaking of great writing, the quote "weak rage means weak strength" was a brilliant insight as to why the Aethreans were not possed by Black Death. That was a great promo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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