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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 8, 2013 2:12:51 GMT -5
wow, you are really reading and paying attention to the detail...I really need to make sure I am on top of my game when it comes to my writing!!
As for the tournament final...stay tuned...after GalactiCard, there is one more Aethran show...
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 8, 2013 14:31:19 GMT -5
GWF #7 (The Aethran War Tour Card #2/3) GalactiCard I: “Darkest Death, Gleaming Glory” @ Warrior Village Coliseum, Aethra
*As the biggest show in the Galaxy opens up, Hype & Dialectus welcome the fans to GalactiCard I!! It is noted that Abroz has not yet shown up, and it is also noted, and shown via the VideoCams that the coliseum has an ungodly amount of security, as the GWF is pulling out all the stops to not have another riot like GWF #6...
Nightmare Matrix Match
Oracle vs. Tricks
>Even though it seemed the “Master of Nightmares” Tricks was affected more by the Matrix, he still came out on top, coming out of an illusion that had both men standing on the very edge of a high cliff before Oracle did. A loaded boot, followed up with Death by Hanging, then COULROPHOBIA gives Tricks the win over Oracle.
Rylock Rod Match
Patch vs. Paralyze
>Paralyze puts away Patch, smashing him across the head very early in the match with the Rylock Rod (via a deathjump) for the pinfall
GWF Galaxian Tag Team Title Top Shot Match (Winner earns a Title Shot on THIS CARD)
BD Revolution vs. The Master Race
>BD Revolution takes down The Master Race after Havoc blasts Thraxx with the COSMIC NIGHTMARE for the pin
*Once again, Zygon is very openly irritated, glaring at his tag team partner, before leaving the ring without Thraxx...
*The VidCam shows the Gladiators in their specially designed locker room (made to look like the Overmaster's own Throne Room). They are all 4 celebrating Paralyze's dominating victory over Patch. Overmaster says that after Rush & Turmoil destroy The Ultimate Fighters, and then eliminate the so-called “threat” of Revolution, retaining their tag team titles, then Overmaster will stand over his own fallen opponents, winning the GWF Title. Overmaster then says that Paralyze is now also in line for the Interplanetary Title...The Aethrans will dominate the GWF just as the “Originals” did...
At that point, there is a knock on the door, and Commissioner Euritar walks in. He looks around, nods his head in “approval”, says that he likes the interior decorating. Overmaster tells him that he better have a good reason to disturb him. Euritar says that this is a very good reason...the Tag Team Title Match will be a No DQ / No CO match, and The Leveler will not be permitted at ringside. Euritar ends the conversation, leaving a furious Aethran Overmaster with the words, “Have a great day!!”
HelSin vs. Coven Black
>HelSin scores the pin out of nowhere over Coven Black with a sit-out spinning facebuster
*Before HelSin could begin to celebrate, he is attacked by Balaal!! HelSin does what he can, but before long, Coven Black joins in on the attack, also!! Out to the ring charges Tauran & PSI for the save, sending Balaal & Coven Black retreating to the back...
GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles (Winners vs. BD Revolution later on THIS CARD), No DQ / No CO / No One Allowed At Ringside
The Ultimate Fighters vs. Rush & Turmoil (ch)
>The Ultimate Fighters defeat Rush & Turmoil after Shoot locked Rush in TAPPED OUT!
(THE ULTIMATE FIGHTERS WIN THE GWF GALAXIAN TAG TEAM TITLES)
3-Way BattleZone Match
(Special Rules for the Interplanetary Title: Bishop Hell begins the BattleZone Match, defending the IP Title. IF he loses, the title changes hands to the winner. IF he wins, he no longer defends the IP Title in the BattleZone Match. In other words, the first time the IP Champion successfully defends the IP Title, whoever that wrestler may be, the IP Title is no longer defended for the remainder of the BattleZone)
Swarm, Payback, Overtime & ? ? ? vs. The Legends (Hector, Thantos, Star Warrior, Ensor) vs. Team Black Death (Bishop Hell [Interplanetary Champion], Balaal, Mantis, Death Masque Betrayer)
(Swarm's team wins the “coin flip”, and out to the ring is the “masked mystery partner”!! He is announced, by Swarm, as a time traveling warrior...Ultramantis Black!!)
GWF Interplanetary Title Match
Ultramantis Black vs. Bishop Hell (ch)
>Ultramantis Black stuns Bishop Hell with a flying dropkick into the turnbuckle, followed up with a Cosmic Disaster for the victory
(ULTRAMANTIS BLACK WINS THE GWF INTERPLANETARY TITLE)
GWF Interplanetary Title Match
Hector, the Holy Brown Bear vs. Ultramantis Black (ch)
>Ultramantis Black defeats Hector with the PRAYING MANTIS BOMB, successfully defending the IP Title (and Ultramantis Black will leave GalactiCard I as the GWF Interplanetary Champion)
NOTE: THE GWF INTERPLANETARY CHAMPIONSHIP WILL NO LONGER BE DEFENDED IN THIS BATTLEZONE MATCH
GWF Interplanetary Non-Title Match
Mantis vs. Ultramantis Black (ch) [1 token]
>Ultramantis Black manages to score the win over Mantis in a tough match via the PRAYING MANTIS BOMB (Mantis = 6 tokens / Ultramantis Black = 4 tokens)
GWF Interplanetary Non-Title Match
Ensor vs. Ultramantis Black (ch) [4 tokens]
>Ensor ends the winning streak of Ultramantis Black, blasting him with the ERUPTION OF THARSIS out of the turnbuckle for the pin
Ensor [3 tokens] vs. Death Masque Betrayer
>Ensor puts Betrayer away with the ERUPTION OF THARSIS in an exciting, high impact match
Swarm vs. Ensor [ 4 tokens]
>Swarm defeats Ensor (who nearly kicked out) with the VENOMOUS STINGER
Swarm [0 tokens] vs. Balaal (last member of Black Death)
>Balaal over Swarm by DQ outside the ring
Thantos vs. Balaal [0 tokens]
>Balaal defeats Thantos via the Serpent Death Lock
Payback vs. Balaal [3 tokens]
>Payback puts Balaal away with the EXVENGE (+6) in a hard fought match (Payback = 4 tokens / Balaal = 7 tokens), eliminating Team Black Death from the BattleZone Match
Payback [4 tokens] vs. Star Warrior
>Star Warrior defeats Payback in a bloody match (Payback = 8 tokens / Star Warrior = 5 tokens)
Overtime vs. Star Warrior [5 tokens]
>Overtime scores the win over Star Warrior, forcing him to tap to the Rings of Saturn
(THE TEAM OF SWARM, PAYBACK, ULTRAMANTIS BLACK & OVERTIME WIN THE 3-WAY BATTLEZONE MATCH, WITH OVERTIME BEING THE SOLE SURVIVOR)
GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles, Cosmic Cage Match
BD Revolution vs. The Ultimate Fighters (ch)
- Alpha Female escapes the cage after slingshotting Shoot into the cage wall, followed up with a full power slam
- Clinch escapes the cage after blasting Havoc with a Superman Punch
- Shoot escapes the cage after locking Havoc in TAPPED OUT!
>The Ultimate Fighters defeat BD Revolution, successfully defending their Tag Team Titles
(THE ULTIMATE FIGHTERS DEFEND THEIR TAG TEAM TITLES)
Cosmic Cage Match
Tauran vs. Anivar
>Tauran defeats Anivar (who seemed to be dazed, stunned, and confused during the match) after a deathjump
GWF Galaxian Title, Fatal Four Way Match
Harbinger vs. Endgame vs. Aethran Overmaster vs. Monolith (ch)
- Harbinger eliminated Aethran Overmaster after planting him with the Black Death Cometh
- Monolith eliminated Harbinger by pin after an armless airplane spin
- Monolith eliminated Endgame, forcing him to tap to I BREAK YOU
>Monolith wins the match, successfully defending his GWF Galaxian Title
(MONOLITH DEFENDS HIS GWF GALAXIAN TITLE)
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 8, 2013 16:43:22 GMT -5
The next and final stop on the GWF Aethran War Tour will be at the newly built, New Aethran Arena...an arena built and dedicated to the Aethran Overmaster for “liberating” Aethra from the “dull illusions of dominance that was Spike and the rest of his regime” (quoted from Aethran Overmaster). GWF #8 “Escape from New Aethra, will feature the finals of the Aethra Ultimate Escape Match Tournament that was supposed to take place on GWF #6. Other big matches have also been signed...read on for the preview!!
GWF #8 “Escape from New Aethra” (at New Aethra Arena, Aethra) PREVIEW
Tricks vs. Hector, the Holy Brown Bear in a GWF Interplanetary Title Top Shot Match - Tricks is coming out of GalactiCard I with momentum. He defeated his former partner, Oracle, and Euritar has now decided to make this an Interplanetary Title Top Shot Match. Hector needs this win in a bad way, especically since he has yet to really make any waves in the win column. "The time for games is over...", Hector has said. Tricks is "laughing out loud" at Hector, asking, "Why so serious, litte brown bear?" With a shot at the GWF Interplanetary Title on the line, this match should be a very intense meeting between two of the most devious minds in the GWF.
Military Powers vs. Leaders of the Pack - Military Powers have truly been left behind. The Leaders of the Pack have been on the house show circuit, and are looking to make a comeback on GWF TV...
The Master Race vs. BD Spellbound - Black Death seems to be reeling from the heavy losses at GalactiCard. It is also rumored that the Black Death team have lost their Black Death powers due to Harbinger's loss in the Fatal Four Way match on GalactiCard. Spellbound are determined to turn things around for the team by defeating a tough team in their own right, The Master Race. The question, though, is...what about Zygon? He seems to be losing his temper and patiance with his partner, Thraxx. Could this open him up to Spellbound's power? And if Black Death has indeed lost their powers, could Zygon still be at risk?
Swarm vs. Mantis - Swarm is still trying to calm the rage of his son, Mantis. Mantis still only wants to smash, stomp, kick and kill Swarm. Is there an end in sight for these two? This is one of the saddest, and most bitter feuds of 2127, as father and son continue to face each other...
Payback vs. Ensor in a Titan Death Match - These two former tag team partners are finally meeting, one on one, in the ring. Ensor turned on Payback at GWF #6, joining the Legends. Rumor is, he is still not content. He has been overheard as saying that The Legends do not even respect what he is capable of. Ensor claims that it is only a matter of time before he is the Interplanetary Champion, seeing that he was the one that defeated champion, Ultramantis Black, eliminating him from the BattleZone Match at GalactiCard I. Payback has reminded Ensor that Ultramantis Black had already fought 3 other wrestlers before Ensor took that win. Payback also has stated that for Ensor to get anywhere, he will need to go through Payback...and remember, "Payback's a b***h!!"
BD Revolution vs. Rush & Turmoil in a GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles Top Shot, Cosmic Cage Match - Finally, a match that the galaxy has been waiting for will take place...and on the last show of the Aethran War Tour, at that!! Revolution and Rush & Turmoil will meet in the ring, inside a Cosmic Cage, with the winner challenging The Ultimate Fighters (the current champions) for the belts at GWF #9. This is a blood feud that has been building up the entire year...
Aethran Overmaster vs. Harbinger in a GWF Galaxian Title Top Shot, Cosmic Cage Match - Harbinger was the man who eliminated the Overmaster in the Fatal Four Way Match for the Title at GalactiCard I. Euritar is pitting both of these powerhouses against one another again, this time, it is just the two of them....inside a cage. The winner will challenge GWF Champion, Monolith, at GWF #9. Either way you look at it...the GWF is going to a be an exciting (and bloody) place no matter who wins this match!!
Paralyze vs. Ultramantis Black (ch) for the GWF Interplanetary Title - Paralyze dominated Patch at GalactiCard, ending their match extremely early. Because of that dominating win, Euritar is giving him a shot at the GWF Interplanetary Title, currently being held by brand new newcomer, Ultramantis Black. speaking of Ultramantis Black. He shocked the galaxy by defeating Bishop Hell for the Title, then soundly defeating Hector in the very next fall to cement his IP Title reign. Three wins under his belt on his debut card is putting him around the top of the food chain. Not to mention many targets on his back. Will he be able to continue his winning ways to defeat the powerhouse, Paralyze? Or will Paralyze finally realize his potential, and win the GWF Interplanetary Title?
FDF (Endgame, Tauran, PSI & HelSin) vs. Fight Club (The Ultimate Fighters [GWF Tag Champs] & Patch) & Monolith (GWF Champ) in the Aethran Ultimate Escape Match Tournament Finals - What can be said about this match? It was supposed to happen at GWF #6, but due to the rioting that took place, the match was cancelled. Now, here these 8 men will stand inside the cage, one team to be crowned the Aethran Ultimate Escape Match Tournament victors. The three top title holders (Monolith as GWF Champ, and TUF as GWF Tag Champs) are involved in this superpower match. The FDF are also looking to climb back in the saddle and show just what has set the FDF apart from other stables in the GWF over the years...Should be a great fight.
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Post by cakejedi on Aug 8, 2013 19:27:31 GMT -5
wow, you are really reading and paying attention to the detail...I really need to make sure I am on top of my game when it comes to my writing!! As for the tournament final...stay tuned...after GalactiCard, there is one more Aethran show... It truely is a pleasure to read every work you write. Your writing is THAT good. There are only a handful of feds that I read on a regular basis, and yours is one of them. Your fed is so good it has inspired me to purchase the Blackk Death intro pack. I am currently running tourneys to determine the champs before I delve into the story. Keep up the GREAT work! |
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Post by Eliath on Aug 9, 2013 8:35:16 GMT -5
Wow that was a great card Mynnotaur
"Have a nice day." LOL! Awesome! I could totally hear him saying that and I could picture AOM's fury afterwards.
Congrats to UMB for winning the title; Ensor should get the first shot at him; Paralyze is just as deserving, but Ensor has a clean win over him - besides, I'm thinking that Paralyze will choke in his shot anyway.
I really love how you play out your Battlezone matches; you gave me an idea for one of my upcoming shows with that. I like how the winning team must then face each other until this is only one man left - great job!
I'm also stoked to see your Fatal Four Way as an elimination match; I really believe that is the only way to do it! Glad to see Monolith win (he's not been doing well for me since EOD squashed him).
Looking forward to the next card; you are booking awesome matchups!
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Post by on_the_edge on Aug 10, 2013 20:40:09 GMT -5
wow, you are really reading and paying attention to the detail...I really need to make sure I am on top of my game when it comes to my writing!! Like everyone has said, this is some great action you have going on. Nicely detailed with great story lines, twists and turns and plenty of action. But one small thing you may want to work on is proofreading. Not a big deal but a few times you doubled a word or used the wrong name. It happens when your brain is thinking one thing and your fingers go into business for themselves. I know because it happens to me. A LOT lol. It is like a pothole on the Autobahn. I mean you are cruising along having fun and *thump* ya run over it. Does not ruin or even take away from the fun but it keeps it from being as smooth a ride as it could be. I LOVED that reveal of the mystery partner. Ultramantis is a favorite of mine. Plus I LOVE how the name of the next card has a double meaning. Especially seeing what happened at GWF #6. I am looking forward to it and future shows. Keep up the great work! |
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 11, 2013 15:03:46 GMT -5
thanks for the replies (yet again).
Edge (for short?), I know. I try to catch my mistakes, I tend to miss many of them, even after re-reading it a number of times. I do try to go back and fix my mistakes when I catch them...but still. I know.
I type these shows up as I am playing them...so I tend to get caught up in the moment. In fact, I have no idea what is going to happen when I sit down to play the game. I have a general idea, or a concept...but once I start playing/typing...I am just as much a fan, sitting in the front row or in front of the tv watching it all happen. Sometimes, things happen, and I sit in wonder about it all!!
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Post by Eliath on Aug 11, 2013 23:40:24 GMT -5
I type these shows up as I am playing them...so I tend to get caught up in the moment. In fact, I have no idea what is going to happen when I sit down to play the game. I have a general idea, or a concept...but once I start playing/typing...I am just as much a fan, sitting in the front row or in front of the tv watching it all happen. Sometimes, things happen, and I sit in wonder about it all!! This is exactly how I play the game too! I'm as much of a fan as anyone reading my fed. Sometimes things happen and I sit there thinking "DAMN! What the hell do I do now?!?" LOL! I knew there was a reason that I enjoyed reading your fed so much! Keep up the great work! |
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 20, 2013 18:36:35 GMT -5
GWF #8 (The Aethran War Tour Card #3/3) “Escape from New Aethra” @ New Aethra Arena, Aethra
*The show opens up quickly, with Hector and Tricks already in the ring for their match...
GWF Interplanetary Interplanetary Title Top Shot Match
Tricks vs. Hector
>Tricks puts Hector away with the AXE MURDERER to earn a shot at the GWF Interplanetary Title
(TRICKS EARNS A SHOT AT THE GWF INTERPLANETARY TITLE)
Leaders of the Pack vs. Military Powers
>Leaders of the Pack score the pin after the ANDROMEDA DROP on Paganax
*Aethran Overmaster is in his private office suite with Paralyze, Rush & Turmoil, going over strategy for tonight's matches involving the Gladiators...
Overmaster: Tonight, the GWF will buckle under the weight of Aethran Dominance. After I crush this fool, Harbinger, the Black Death will be but a memory, nothing more...And Paralyze, you will become the Interplanetary Champion, destroying this unknown, Ultramantis Black. And Rush & Turmoil...the two of you will begin your ascendance to the top of the Tag Team division. But more important...the two of you will be the first to deal with the traitorous upstarts, Havoc and Strafe...(Overmaster, intensity boiling in his eyes, reiterates) Deal with them...
*Hype and Dialectus (Abroz is once again missing in action from the announce table) talk about the upcoming Aethran matches, and the rumor circulating that the Black Death team lost their so-called “Black Death Powers”, and the two of them question if the Black Death can compete in top form tonight...
BD Spellbound vs. The Master Race
>Spellbound fights back, defeating the dominating Master Race when Balaal does the BITE OF THE SERPENT to Thraxx for the pin
*After the match, Zygon, once again, began arguing with Thraxx about the outcome of the match. Zygon shoved Thraxx, who in turn shoved Zygon back...Zygon really began to show his annoyance towards Thraxx, and it appeared as though the two would come to blows, but Zygon shoved past his long-time tag partner, leaving the ring...
Swarm vs. Mantis
>Swarm wins the match when Mantis no-shows
*After Swarm was declared the winner, Swarm looked to the back, puzzled. After a few moments, Swarm left the ring. As he walked through the curtain, heading to the back, he is attacked by...MANTIS!!?? Mantis was here all along!!?? Mantis locked Swarm in the PINCER CLAMP, screaming obscenities at his father, refusing to release the hold!! It took several officials to force Mantis to release the PINCER CLAMP, and several more to pull him to the back as other officials tried to help Swarm...
Titan Death Match
Payback vs. Ensor
>A bloody Ensor defeats a bloody Payback with the ERUPTION OF THARSIS (Payback = 5 tokens / Ensor = 7 tokens)
GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles Top Shot Cage Match
BD Revolution vs. Rush & Turmoil
- Havoc escaped the cage after a Wreaking Havoc on Rush in mid-flight attempt at a deathjump
- Alpha Female escaped the cage after nailing Rush with SLAVE NO MORE
>Revolution defeats Rush & Turmoil to earn a shot at the GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles
(BD REVOLUTION EARN A SHOT AT THE GWF TAG TEAM TITLES)
GWF Galaxian Title Top Shot Cosmic Cage Match
Aethran Overmaster vs. Harbinger
>Harbinger escaped the cage, defeating Aethran Overmaster with the PORTENT OF DOOM to earn a shot at the GWF Galaxian Title
GWF Interplanetary Title Match
Paralyze vs. Ultramantis Black (ch)
>Paralyze puts away Ultramantis Black via the HEART TRANSPLANT to win the GWF Interplanetary Title
(PARALYZE WINS THE GWF INTERPLANETARY TITLE)
*The Aethran crowd goes nuts as Paralyze hoists up the GWF Interplanetary Title, especially after the other Gladiators lost their matches tonight...
Aethran Ultimate Escape Match Tournament Finals - “The Escape From New Aethra”
Aethran Ultimate Escape Match
Fight Club (Patch & [GWF Tag Champs] The Ultimate Fighters) & [GWF Champ] Monolith vs. FDF (Endgame, Tauran, HelSin & PSI)
- Tauran escapes the cage after the VICTORY STAR DROP on Patch
- Shoot escapes the cage after locking PSI in a Menace Ankle Lock
- Monolith escapes the cage after press slamming PSI head-first into the cage
- Endgame escapes the cage after the ULTIMA LEAP on Patch
- Patch escapes the cage after reversing a slam by PSI into the cage
- PSI escapes the cage after MIND OVER MATTER on Clinch
- Clinch escapes the cage after the ULTIMATE COMBO KO on HelSin
>Fight Club & Monolith win the tournament final, leaving HelSin in the cage
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Post by Mynnotaur on Aug 20, 2013 18:38:59 GMT -5
The next show will be GWF #9 "Day of Reckoning"...this will lead into my version of the Impossible Tournament (same format, I just call it a different name): Omega Classic Memorial Cup Tournament.
The matches signed for GWF #9 so far:
Tricks vs. Paralyze (ch) for the GWF Interplanetary Title
BD Revolution vs. TUF (ch) for the GWF Galaxian Tag Team Titles
Harbinger vs. Monolith (ch) for the GWF Galaxian Title
More matches will be added soon...
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