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Post by Crossbones on Dec 29, 2017 8:55:58 GMT -5
Promo Nitro: Gentlemen, I brought you two together to talk about this bombshell of an announce by Commissioner Encubus. He announced this week on The Tar Pit and you were present Disciple of Terror, that Encubus is looking someone to be the face of FTR and he has picked one of you two. Disciple of Terror: Let, me interrupt you right there Nitro. I am the Disciple of Terror! I am the most terrorizing force in the FTR and I will remain that way going forward. Crossbones, is just a pretender... He is a conman, who uses hallucination type drugs to poison the minds of his opponents. Which those tactics won't work on me, I can assure you of that! Nitro: What do you have to say Crossbones, anything to defend these accusations? Captain Crossbones: HAHAHAHAHA! Disciple of Terror, eh? Let's take a look at the word disciple... a disciple is defined as a student, someone who is in the process of learning how to do something. So, are you learning how to be terrorizing, Disciple of Terror? I can assure you, I am no disciple of fear or terror. Before, I came to the FTR... I preyed on space vessels in the Brymstone system, spreading fear and terror among the outter rims of space. When was the last time you spread that kind of fear among a galaxy? Ask your manager, Doomsayer about the names of those who have come from Brymstone to bring terror to the Universe. Names like Anarchy, Blazing Skull, and Death's head who even Doomsayer was a afraid of himself. Disciple of Terror: You are none of those names, you are just a cheap knockoff... Captain Crossbones: "Cheap knock-off"? Those three names I mentioned have nothing on me... I can assure you of that! You don't want to go to war with me, Disciple... Because, I will take you to school and show you just how terrifying I can be! Disciple of Terror: Oh, yeah? I'm not scared of you, Boney! Disciple of Terror was starting to get worked up at the words changed by him and Crossbones.Captain Crossbones: HAHAHAHA! I know the secret that your race has been hiding for thousands of year, Disciple. Disciple of Terror: What are you taking about, Crossbones? Captain Crossbones: You know what I'm talking about... That Cygnus is really just a colony planet of Andromeda system. You see Disciple, you're nothing but an AniMen reptile along with your whole race of people. Your so called mentor Comrade Terror, was nothing but an AniMen reptile as well. Why do you think he devolved in the Transevolver, to the animal that he was inside? At this Disciple of Terror got into the face of Crossbones.Nitro: GENTLEMEN! GENTLEMEN! Commissioner Encubus was passing by and over heard the commotion taking place. Commissioner Encubus: What the hell is going on here? I could here the two of you from all the way down the hall! When I said I wanted a competition between the two of you, I meant a competition to spread fear and terror among those in the FTR roster not each other! I'm going to only say this once... You, two are not to lay a finger on the other! If you to should happen to meet in the ring at Galaxy Gauntlet then so be it. But, not until then... Do I make myself clear?! Both, Disciple of Terror and Crossbones shook their heads, Yes.Commissioner Encubus: Just to make sure that you do not get any bad ideas in those heads of yours... Disciple of Terror, I am putting you in a match against Astarte this coming week. Crossbones, I am giving you what you wanted Blue Chip, in a Brymstone Coffin Match. So, I want you to go out there and show fear and terror to your opponents. Disciple of Terror: That's not fair, giving Crossbones a Brymstone Coffin Match and I just get a regular match. At least, give me a Cygnus Brass Knuckles Match against Astarte. Encubus starts to walk off, when he looks back and says.Commissioner Encubus: Whatever...
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Post by Swarm on Dec 29, 2017 9:57:45 GMT -5
Awesome write up.
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Post by Crossbones on Dec 29, 2017 10:05:37 GMT -5
Thanks Swarm... I had this whole thing playing around in my head these last couple of days. So, normally when that happens I have to write it down on paper and tweak it. I'm pretty happy with the way it came out.
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Post by Pariah on Dec 29, 2017 12:36:34 GMT -5
Smokin' verbal exchange between two of the top FTR players... But, this round definitely goes to the Captain for getting under his new rival's reptillian skin... How will Disciple retaliate without breaking the rules laid out by Encubus? Should be very interesting indeed... Awesome work!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 29, 2017 13:09:19 GMT -5
Seems vaguely familiar....
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Post by Bri on Dec 29, 2017 13:39:17 GMT -5
Fantastic promo Crossbones! Fleshes both of these top attractions out some more and gives us some more of the inner workings of your fed. Definitely looking forward to the next card. Agree with Pariah though, if we are keeping score then the Captain definitely won that last round. But this one will go at least 15 rounds I'm sure. Great stuff!
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Post by Crossbones on Dec 29, 2017 13:54:01 GMT -5
Fantastic promo Crossbones! Fleshes both of these top attractions out some more and gives us some more of the inner workings of your fed. Definitely looking forward to the next card. Agree with Pariah though, if we are keeping score then the Captain definitely won that last round. But this one will go at least 15 rounds I'm sure. Great stuff! Thanks Bri, it will only pick up from here... I promise you that. Can Crossbones get in the head of DOT? I have a few things in mind for this rivalry for the top heel position. I think the next thing that needs to be answered is there truth to what Crossbones is saying to DoT about the people of Cygnus being AniMen reptiles. I think only one alien can answer those questions... Doomsayer.
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Post by Crossbones on Dec 29, 2017 14:01:01 GMT -5
Seems vaguely familiar.... @kevinb... Yes I did take two points you made on your fed about Crossbones being a con-artist, then him using drugs to infect fear into his opponents and addressed them on mine. If you want to use things like that on your fed its totally fine more power to you. But, I would ask that you keep your sly little comments off of my fed. If you don't have something positive to say then don't say it at all. I ask that you refrain from posting on my fed posts, unless you have something to contribute to it. You can tell your FTR story on your page and I will continue to tell mine on this page. Thank you.
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Post by Crossbones on Dec 29, 2017 19:55:38 GMT -5
Backstage Disciple of Terror: I have to know the truth, Doomsayer! Is what Crossbones said true about the citizens of Cygnus, are we a colony of the AniMen race? I just always thought that we were a reptilian like race. Doomsayer: It doesn't matter kid, you have to get your head in the game. You have the potential to be the top star in this federation and then go on to GWF. But, you can't let this Crossbones get into your head! Disciple of Terror: It matters because all my life I have looked up to Comrade Terror. I always wanted to be him! He was my idol! But, if we are just AniMen... and the Transevolver devolved Comrade Terror into his primal state of being reptilian, because he is an AniMen... Do I really want to be like Comrade Terror? Doomsayer: Look, kid! You don't know anything what happen back then and I'm asking you not to press the issue. Disciple of Terror: I thought you were my manager and ally in this fight? Doomsayer: I am kid... I am. You want to know what happen to Comrade Terror? I'll tell you if it will get you off my back. Comrade Terror was a mediocre wrestler. I saw some potential in him and knew my new Transevolver could make him bigger and better. So, I told him about the Transevolver and what it could do for him. He wanted to be a main eventer and gain the GWF title. Everything was going great until eight years later, when he started to show signs of devoloving. I did some research into the matter and it was a gene in his DNA, that I didn't compute in the first time he went through the Transevolver. It was an AniMen gene, that was filed in there hidden among all the other DNA genes. Comrade Terror wasn't happy that he was losing his place on the roster. He begged me for five years, to be placed back into the Transevolver. I warned him that it would cause him to devolve quicker... but he didn't care. His greed for power got the better of him and he became obsessed. I finally gave into his wishes and put him through the Transevolver. It enhanced his abilities once again, but it devolved him even quicker this time. I only blame myself for his untimely death in the ring. So, that is the tragic life of Comrade Terror. Kid, the reason I came back into wrestling is to right that wrong I committed all those years ago. Just remember, you are your own Cygnusian. Your not Comrade Terror, so stop trying to be like him. It doesn't matter if you have AniMen genes in your DNA or not. It only matters that you be the best Cygnusian you can be... which is ruthless aggression! Disciple of Terror shakes his head.Disciple of Terror: How do we get even with Crossbones? Doomsayer: That's a true Cygnusian talking! I think i might just have the perfect plan...
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Post by Swarm on Dec 29, 2017 20:00:46 GMT -5
Backstage Disciple of Terror: I have to know the truth, Doomsayer! Is what Crossbones said true about the citizens of Cygnus, are we a colony of the AniMen race? I just always thought that we were a reptilian like race. Doomsayer: It doesn't matter kid, you have to get your head in the game. You have the potential to be the top star in this federation and then go on to GWF. But, you can't let this Crossbones get into your head! Disciple of Terror: It matters because all my life I have looked up to Comrade Terror. I always wanted to be him! He was my idol! But, if we are just AniMen... and the Transevolver devolved Comrade Terror into his primal state of being reptilian, because he is an AniMen... Do I really want to be like Comrade Terror? Doomsayer: Look, kid! You don't know anything what happen back then and I'm asking you not to press the issue. Disciple of Terror: I thought you were my manager and ally in this fight? Doomsayer: I am kid... I am. You want to know what happen to Comrade Terror? I'll tell you if it will get you off my back. Comrade Terror was a mediocre wrestler. I saw some potential in him and knew my new Transevolver could make him bigger and better. So, I told him about the Transevolver and what it could do for him. He wanted to be a main eventer and gain the GWF title. Everything was going great until eight years later, when he started to show signs of devoloving. I did some research into the matter and it was a gene in his DNA, that I didn't compute in the first time he went through the Transevolver. It was an AniMen gene, that was filed in there hidden among all the other DNA genes. Comrade Terror wasn't happy that he was losing his place on the roster. He begged me for five years, to be placed back into the Transevolver. I warned him that it would cause him to devolve quicker... but he didn't care. His greed for power got the better of him and he became obsessed. I finally gave into his wishes and put him through the Transevolver. It enhanced his abilities once again, but it devolved him even quicker this time. I only blame myself for his untimely death in the ring. So, that is the tragic life of Comrade Terror. Kid, the reason I came back into wrestling is to right that wrong I committed all those years ago. Just remember, you are your own Cygnusian. Your not Comrade Terror, so stop trying to be like him. It doesn't matter if you have AniMen genes in your DNA or not. It only matters that you be the best Cygnusian you can be... which is ruthless aggression! Disciple of Terror shakes his head.Oh man. Rough couple of weeks for DOT!
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