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Post by Eliath on Sept 7, 2009 5:08:27 GMT -5
Morpheus just cannot find anyone to defeat Omega...looks like he's going to have to do it himself.  Like Ricken Prince's actions; Santon's were a definate surprise though! Great stuff!! Not sure why Bullwhip elbow dropped Morpheus in the tag-team match; he helped the Guardians win. I'm certain Morpheus has a reason though. Thought Screw's entrance was excellent, but his performance fizzled. I thought he might get it done. Liked the fact that she shook Omega's hand after he destroyed him with a clothesline. Great job there!!! All in all, another GREAT show!!! |
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Post by cakejedi on Sept 7, 2009 12:18:22 GMT -5
Morpheus just cannot find anyone to defeat Omega...looks like he's going to have to do it himself. Like Ricken Prince's actions; Santon's were a definate surprise though! Great stuff!! Not sure why Bullwhip elbow dropped Morpheus in the tag-team match; he helped the Guardians win. I'm certain Morpheus has a reason though. Thought Screw's entrance was excellent, but his performance fizzled. I thought he might get it done. Liked the fact that she shook Omega's hand after he destroyed him with a clothesline. Great job there!!! All in all, another GREAT show!!! Eliath, you are ALWAYS the first to comment on my cards. Thank you for that. That means a lot to me! Bullwhip is just extremely over zealous. He only wanted to get his hands on the Guardians. He has a need to prove himself to Blacklash. Santon's actions surprised me too, especially since he is a 'loner'. This was a scene that took a life of it's own. I am excited to see where it goes from here. Morpheus is starting to grow restless with only being a force behind the scenes. He is starting to feel the need to be a force IN the ring as well. Stay tuned. |
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Sept 7, 2009 13:21:51 GMT -5
An act of mercy by Santon? It is another good example of how 'alive' these characters can become and you just become the vessel telling the story.
I really though Screw would be the one to get the job done, but I have to agree with Eliath, Morpheus is going to have to position himself to take care of Omega himself.
Commander Sam delivered a solid performance in the 6-man tag match, hitting three consecutive Star Spangled Banner's for the win.
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Post by cakejedi on Sept 22, 2009 13:30:12 GMT -5
An act of mercy by Santon? It is another good example of how 'alive' these characters can become and you just become the vessel telling the story. I really though Screw would be the one to get the job done, but I have to agree with Eliath, Morpheus is going to have to position himself to take care of Omega himself. Commander Sam delivered a solid performance in the 6-man tag match, hitting three consecutive Star Spangled Banner's for the win. Sorry it took so long to respond to your comments. I appreciate everyone who reads and always try to reply to comments. It has just been a crazy month. Sorry! Screw gave an exciting match. Omega was just a little bit better. Sam looked good. He had to redeem himself after his horrible showing in his title match against Omega. How long will Morpheus let Omega stay on top? All I can say is "Stay Tuned!" Thanks for reading! |
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Post by cakejedi on Oct 12, 2009 14:15:17 GMT -5
Omega walks into a hospital room.
“Miss Smith?”
The woman lying on the bed looks up.
“Yes.”
“I am Omega of Cetus. I am here to apologize on behalf of the GWF for what happened to you last night. How are you doing?”
“I’m OK.”
“What Ricken Prince did to you was inexcusable. That is not what the GWF is supposed to be about. I am here to personally guarantee to you that he will never harm another woman again. I also want to assure you that I will personally take care of all your hospital bills as well as compensate you for any loss wages.”
“That is very nice of you, but that will not be necessary. Santon has already taken care of the hospital expenses and has also left me a bag of gold. I will be OK.”
“Did Santon say anything to you?”
“Nothing. He took me to the hospital, waited around until the doctors treated me. He then stayed at my bedside until I fell asleep. When I woke up, he was gone. There was a bag of gold on the chair where he was sitting. That was the last I saw of him.”
“Again, I am very sorry for what happened to you. If you ever need anything, please contact me at the GWF offices. I am glad to see that you are doing ok. Take care Miss Smith.”
Omega turns to leave.
He pauses in the doorway. He turns around.
‘Miss Smith, can I ask you something?”
“Yes.”
“This may be getting a little personal. You don’t have to answer this if you don’t want to. But…why did you do it? Why did you want to be Ricken Prince’s princess when you do not even know the man?”
“….I was hoping that it would be my break.”
“What do you mean?”
“I have been ordinary all my life. I was ordinary in school. I have an ordinary, boring job. Even my name is ordinary. I was hoping that this would be my chance to be something…someone special.”
Omega walks over to Sally and rests his hand on her shoulder.
“Miss Smith, you are far from ordinary. You are unique. There is only one you in the entire universe. That makes you special. No one, not Ricken Prince, not money, not a job, and not a boyfriend, can make you special. You are special by being you. And I guarantee that there is a destiny for you in this universe. You were created to do something that only you can do. Always believe that. Have faith, Miss Smith. Have faith.”
Omega turns to walk away.
“Mr. Omega…”
Omega turns around.
“Yes.”
“Thank you….I hope you are right about me. You are a good man. I don’t know why the fans boo you. Thanks again.”
“You’re welcome Miss Smith. And thank you. You do not know how much hearing you say those things means to me. Now get some rest. Take care of yourself and make sure you go and fulfill your purpose in this universe.”
As Omega leaves the hospital room he wipes a tear from his eye.
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Post by Alexander Ubel on Oct 13, 2009 20:57:12 GMT -5
Powerful story element cakejedi. I've always enjoyed reading your write-ups.
Taking a small sabbatical myself to allow the creative juices time to start flowing again. I have some big plans coming up. I'm also trying to give Eliath time to post his card featuring Shylock/Messenger before I forge ahead in my GWFZ.
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Post by cakejedi on Oct 13, 2009 23:23:06 GMT -5
Powerful story element cakejedi. I've always enjoyed reading your write-ups. Taking a small sabbatical myself to allow the creative juices time to start flowing again. I have some big plans coming up. I'm also trying to give Eliath time to post his card featuring Shylock/Messenger before I forge ahead in my GWFZ. Thanks Dharneth. That scene had been in my head for a long time, but I hesitated on posting it because it does not really advance my story. But I decided to go ahead because it gives a glimpse of Omega's character. I focus a lot on Morpheus, so I wanted to show a little bit of Omega. Glad you liked it. BTW, I just finished rolling the next card. WOW! It will open up a lot of interesting ideas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Post by Uriah on Oct 14, 2009 19:46:50 GMT -5
Great stuff, hope to see more
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Post by cakejedi on Oct 19, 2009 19:31:18 GMT -5
Great stuff, hope to see more Thanks for reading!!!!!! I hope you check back again! |
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Post by cakejedi on Oct 19, 2009 19:58:37 GMT -5
The Disney holo-channel is proud to present…….
The Universal premier of the first video from the hot new group...
P2
Coming up next on the Disney holo-channel…
A brand new episode of Leahdees Pleiades!
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Soloar Flare turns off the holo-vision set and looks at Moonstrike.
“I can’t believe Morpheus turned us into a teeny bopper band.”
“He says this is good for our career. We’ll just have to trust him.”
“I hope you’re right…”
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